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Did I said you?
That I love you.

Will we meet again?
To handle all the pain.

Is it a best time?
To make you my rhyme.

Will you be my wife?
For all times of life.

Did you dreaming yesterday at nine?
Because you came to dreams of mine.

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12AM

When I received a notification my heart start jumping in happiness but it was a spam message.Yes today is my birthday. I'm not a birthday celebrating guy but as per law of nature I'm also human.A tiny part of heart is eagerly waiting for a single wish though its not a big thing but some expectation is there that atleast one will be awake only to wish me.I don't expect them to dedicate song like see you again but a wish will make my wandering heart happy. Birthday is the only day that make 12am very special or even worse.My hope was very strong cause I'm waiting till 1am and then it became 2am atlast it was 3am and I'm still waiting for peoples to wish me at 12am.But now the Difficult part is convincing my heart that you didn't get any wish because of network issue not because you are not important to them.I hope time will change people atleast in the next year either people wish me at 12am or I should accept the reality.
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"MANDI"

We sweat, we fail.
A farmer’s Story

Inspired by Yashowardhan Mishra
Date: 10/1/2020
 
This poem realistically showcased the problems faced by the farmers at every point of time and eventually made them to end their lives.


Trenchant Sun and Dust, sometimes scurry rain,
Comes and goes, in vain.
He and upshot yield, uphold!
Nevertheless, the decision still bold.
 
Happy half wife, crown of his tribe,
Grant the sweat, and courage the effort to ripe.
Blood spilled, got scars, working on the ground,
Eventually simper, and please the crop around.
 
Tiny scion, born few years ago,
Tried hard, made hands in Dirt to go.
Last day, he rewarded to accompanied like trade folk,
To witness the abundance of pay-off.
 
Pleaded he, for elbow-grease,
Unaided farmer, destined to cease.
He doesn’t do math, his mistake,
Debt heavy and survival were at stake.
 
Marketplace urged him to pay,
For the possession he lay.
He amused and hilariously crying’
Is this my pay-off, why was I trying?
 
Tiny scion, he was still lost,
He doesn’t do math either, but sense the hoax to level worst.
Lost! whatever they out-turn
Tears and grief in glut, they won!
 
Rakhi Verma


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When some happenings strikes your heart
You want it vanished but still you can't abort

When some misdeed disturbs your peace
When some strangers bounce back at ease

When you don't wanna have that feeling
Once you had and now it has no meaning

When words were a lot to you
When people made you feel true

When life was full of stars
And suddenly drowned deep into scars

The incidents are now just a past
They are gone but memories won't last

When pain leaves a trace
When fake smiles becomes intro to your race

Just walk ahead my friend dont stumble
Speak it out, Be loud, dont mumble

Rise it higher than ever,
What you need to do is move a step closer

~ vishal

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“By all means marry. If you get a good wife you will become happy, and if you get a bad one you will become a philosopher.” - Socrates

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Ecstasy

Shooting it straight up her clampy skin,
A façade awning her face,
She can’t remember her lost innocence.
She knew no one could hurt her, but her,
And she tears up, not from agony,
but her longing, and ache for more.
Cackling inside her, the fire
Mocks her thirst, her desire.
She gurgles, embracing every inch of her black tar soul,
With fainting beats of her cocaine heart.
She slips, turns blue,
And then,
Out of the blue, into the black.

#kt #poetry #review
I'm an abnoxious witch,
Who very well know how to brew.
Though I'm sitting in peace
Just like the drop of dew.


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Pain
There is nothing you can do about pain. It demands to be felt. Worrying only makes you feel much worse. You are wrong if you think that being loved by someone can heal all your pain. You just think that love makes you feel better. Many reasons cause you pain and the first one is trust. You trust someone blindly and they end up hurting you. The pain you feel after the person who meant a lot to you betrays you is the worst. It can be anyone your best friend, your lover or anyone. The pain of being alone disheartens the most and the worst part is when you know there is nothing you can do about it. What you have to do is to keep one thing in mind that 'you are enough' for yourself you don't need anyone to go through the darkest days of your life. It will help you love yourself more and not feel the pain of lossing someone who didn't deserved you. And lastly, stop thinking that love is the only thing that can heal your pain..
#review #abhishek #pain
I cried with them
Even i shared the felicity behind it.
I smiled with them
Also shared the pain behind it.

I tried to understand their state
Also attempted to harbor the anguish.
Commencing from imparting back up to stick up for them..
I did everything..

But Do you know why?
Because i went through all these all alone & can't wish same for them...

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I adore those new cuts given by others
Such like they're beautiful flowers.

Flowers which resembled with spines
Ohh so long,sharp and they shine.
Everytime i start to heal these
New cuts start to arise.
Some heal over time,some are not.
They leave a scar for me and why not. They also love me and adore me
Just like i did it first,
I always thought it is the last...

But no....
They came one after one in line
And i afford them just fine.

My body became the canvas of it.
So beautiful
But for you it'll misfit.

They are all mine....
And i surprised myself everytime.... By- Vodka Lips

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As a doctor, We deal with life and death every minute. If that person will live or die simply depends upon a mere step.
I see death everyday. The crying, the sobbing or the anger of their relatives. It isn't new for me. It never impacts me
But that case totally stirred my entity.

My head appointed me to the case of a 10years old boy whose kidneys were removed. I went to his room and checked his nerves. It was slow so I immediately started my treatment
Several days passed away but his health condition was deteriorating. His body wasn't responding to the medicines..But I was still trying. During his regular check ups he talked with me. Only me and no one else.. The reason I don't know.

One day he told me that he was an orphan. To fed his stomach he sells roses. Due to high fever he suddenly fainted one day and he was hospitalized by a man who promised to cure him.
From his talk I deducted that man was the doctor who removed his kidney.
I had a busy schedule & time was running out. So I advised him to take rest.I was inching towards the doors & suddenly his voice rang out_
"Sis never discriminate between poor & rich.
Treat them evenly. You're a good doctor. If I've the opportunity, then I'll love to be a doctor like you."

Suddenly that IV machine was beeping loudly. Our medical team rushed to the spot. But all our efforts were lost. His last breath was gone.
As a doctor this moment is the most feared, most helpless one - When the patient dies in front of your eyes.
How some greedy doctors play with innocent lives just for money? I'll never know.

But that incident was still alive in my memory. Those words still hunt me in my sleep.
I often wonder....after knowing what that doctor did to him ; If that boy still loves to be a doctor ?

By- Vodka Lips

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I Let You Go

I should have known better
That it'll happen sooner or later
The longer i run my heartbeat will rise
But when that run was for you,
It'll slowly demise.

My life came like a drew
And will disappear like drew
But that doesn't erase what happened,
Surely that doesn't make the memories fade.

You were there for me,
My rock bottom during the waves,
My buoy in the ocean,
The ocean of my endless suffering.
You were my anchor, all of sudden you
weren't

You left me there, abandoned me
Like I was a stray dog, you fed because of pity.

My scream & my agonies
my ires & my surrows
Noone heard them
Because it was loud but silent
It was enormous but invisible.

Sleep wasn't sleep anymore
It was escape from the harsh truth you taught me.

All i wanted is to disappear, without a word
To become my own mystery
Here one minute, gone the next.

Yes, nothing is how it used to be
But I'm still here, stronger than before
Because I tethered myself with me
And I can't thank God enough for this

I let you go,
I watched you walk away from me.
I used to be the one who walk away
But I got to watch you leave.

Got to experience how you felt at those times ,
As you walked away from me.
Step by step, the distance was growing.

I desperately wanted to cling to you
But no, I let you go
It was hardest thing to do,
But nothing felt right more than ever...

By- Vodka Lips

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I have gone and seen it all
Around the world,
there wasn't any difference
Some asked my time,
some were fascinated with my face,
some demanded my loyalty but
none wanted my pains, my sorrows
besides you

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Your voice.

In this quarantine,
Heard something divine.

Being locked in two sheets of pages,
You set my soul free after ages.

Craving for you to engage,
May my words precisely amaze.

I read, whatever you said,
Desire to be in your head.
We can talk everything in thread,
But I wanna hear you before going to bed.

When you say something, I portray,
Will you mind if I lay,
Little longer in your way,
Talking to you makes my day.

A baby face; a childish voice,
So confidently you make your choice,
I stopped everything that'd have made noice,
Your voice, filled me with rejoice.

Don't know how to make you smile,
Will you confess, if I maintain a file,
Reasons of your giggle, I'll compile,
Will you bless my ears every once in a while?

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Sometimes stories don't let me sleep.
Sometimes I have to wake them up.
From brightest day to the darkest night,
Sometimes I clutch on them or they hold me up.

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A Glint Of Hope

I see butterflies above the dead
and beauty in dry deserts.
I see the glow in the thunder,
and the pretty silver lining of grey clouds.
I see wild plants growing in abandoned soils
and in the cracks on abandoned walls.
I see hope in empty minds
and I see hope in broken hearts.
I see a beautiful moon even with the dark spots,
I see a bright sun even with the sun spots.
I believe in the marvelous universe,
even if it has black holes.
I believe in the world even with the news of a bad uproar.
I see hope in empty minds ,
and I see hope in broken hearts.
And I believe in the light,
Though it's dark right now.
There is no white without black,
There is no perfection without flaws,
There is no light without dark,
And there is no life without hope.

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a life full of disappointment


with these clocks hung
and time remain
i don't know i'd really live again
a life full of disappointment

with these pens in hand
and a page blank
I don't know if i'd write again
a life full of disappointment

with these words in head
and a hum in heart
to speak, the lips won't go apart
a life of disappointment

in the mud so still
and a wrist broke
i've reached the end of tunnel of hope
with a life full of disappointment


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Two strangers
exchanging thoughts
In the midst of the night,
Hidden in the dark
But beauty strikes
blind to the eyes.
Taking them far away
from their sad worlds
and bringing them together,
in an unbelievable void.
With pink skies,
and rose gardens,
In love , in love, and in love...
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Dark forces taking over the fortress of love;
The pure hearted love now hiding in an alcove;
Mindless abyss, the world now in tow;
I wonder who the hell started the row;

And then the dark knight comes with more seeds to sow;
I shudder at the prospect of having to show ;
The skeletons of my closet now on my brow;
Still the light kindles in the heart, though slow;

I am hopeful that I will fight off the dreaded foe!

#currenttimes #lockdown #Review #COVID
No disease
holds the list.

The list can
Manifest
through disease.

Be at ease
Don't panic.

#everyone #review #poetry #ahmad
Ambedkarism vs brahminism

Annihilation of caste,
Violation of brahmin law,
Riddles in Hinduism,
Let me show you some wisdom,
Who were shudras,
People love rudra,
What Gandhi and congress have done to the untouchable,
No you are not capable,
The problem of the rupee,
Can we use that for free? We need that,
Buddha or Karl marx,
Oh there you are let's make them leftist,
Buddha and his dhamma,
Let's make a powerful sangha,
Who made the constitution,
This is not your institution,

We need manusmriti.

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