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No Knight

She knew not what did lurk beneath,
In fear she bit between her teeth.

In darkness she looked out for gleam,
As she tried to swim across the stream.

With every push she did not get any further,
Struggling not to be dragged under.

She felt her life ripple, fearing a gasp,
All she wanted was his hand to clasp.

This moment was mixed with regret and tears,
But she was not ready to give into her fears.

Her vision soon begun to get dimmer,
And that’s when she saw a little shimmer.

With last of her strength she reached out for the light,
It got her out and she didn’t need no knight.

As she rose to thank this dearer,
She realized this light was just her in the mirror.

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A game or Games

Here, I'll describe a game I saw today & let's see if you can find which game I'm talking about.

Clue: if you're guessing a very famous game you're wrong.


Two players were playing this game with the help of racket/badminton, a ball & it requires lots of running if you want to play it properly.


What is your answer, I'm sure you're not thinking about cricket because I do( 😂) & it's a obviously wrong, If you guessed Tennis then let me give you some information about players, they were young kid & they had t-shirts & and half pants in middle of winter. Even this information is supporting your guess but you must know one thing having these clothes was not their choice it was their necessity. ( Ohh, I can almost see their face with pairs of joyful eyes & with smiles too)


I want to confess here that even till now I'm not sure about the game I saw, was it tennis with only one racket or was it Cricket with racket instead of a bat & stumps, but I'm sure about the other game which were going on their like, game between their joy & cruel poverty which gave them a ball & a half broken racket in dumping area, game between thick upcoming winter & the clothes they had for that, game between a middle class person's incapability to do something for them & those lower class children's capability to smile, game between their pacifying smiles & my guilt. At the end I left that place because of the smell in the surrounding was unbearable,i.e. my privilege won another game inside me against humanity, but don't let your mind win by thinking about my loss & my weakness, whilst some children are still playing some undefined game arround you.

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Thought||
The older I get the more I realize the value of privacy, it more advisable to keep you circle very small and only let certain people in, that will do you a great world of good fortune.

"You cannot skip chapters,that's not how life works
You have to read every lines, meet every character.
You won't enjoy all of it. Hell some chapters will make you cry for weeks, you will read things you don't want to read, you will have moment when you don't want the pages to end. But you have to let go, stories KEEP the world revolving"

Guide your heart and do not let hurtful words or the action of people that don't matter destroy your sense of peace and self-worth. You can only decide on how you'll be treated and what you're willing to tolerate, because you have no control over anyone
Note: Not all advice from the old people you should listen to REMEMBER foolish people grow old too


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JUST OCCURING


The moment I think I wanna stand somewhere I want to and be something more for myself and the whole included generation continuation. I get back to a thought, realising that I myself am the included 'something' of the so-called generation.

        Thoughts come and go from being so well and kind, to being what this included part becomes sometimes. Purity is defined just as a word when talking about souls. Everything around, is around because it lies right there. This has to happen and everything that occurred was a necessity.

        In the middle of struggling self thoughts, thoughts already there, are incrementing and newly born thoughts starts to increment. The birth never ends.

        Soo so-called is living a life where everyone is just trapped in free souls. 

Everything is just,
JUST OCCURING.


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FLOWER

I whispers in the ear of a flower
Are you hearing me?
Oh pretty flower!
Can you send a message to him?
With your fragrance in air.
Can you tell him how much I miss him?
I didn't find myself.
I think he took my soul with himself.

Oh pretty flower!
Can you please tell him?
I can't escape from myself from reality,
"Let's make our own world,
One which won't crumble,
Where we can always cuddle".

Oh pretty flower!
Can you Please tell him?
"He is emblem of elegance
Epitome of bleeding words
Like last breath of my glance".

Oh pretty flower!
say him with a gesture
Like gifting flowers! 
He is symbolize my happiness, prosperity and romance. 

Oh pretty flower!
Please tell to him that
The way he held my hand
Like a soft petals
That he changed my
Perspective towards life.
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The Sinner|| Poetry

They say, tragedy creates art.
I know, that sinner, kept us apart.

A red dress, with yellow sunflowers on it.
Your white shirt, which glowed under the moonlit.

The grip of your hands, made me whole.
It concealed the wide gaps of my soul.

A sky full of stars,
And there we were, riding a car,
As the trees blur by,
My heart started feeling wry,

The Sinner stopped us,
You tried to discuss.

But the Sinner attacked your spirit,
Your heart split open,
Blood dribbled all over your shirt, making it red.

The pieces of your soul screamed for love,
You wanted to heal, to love again...
You waited for me, to mend your ripped heart.

You screeched all your love out of your heart.
You healed yourself, with the phases of time.

I still remember that night,
Your heart ripped open, blood spilling out of it,
But, I couldn't come.
As, How can a Sinner mend a Saint's heart?

-sresh

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Broken

What am I,
But a broken ear of asphodel
Withered
By your playful gust

I'm a phoenix
Afraid of your fire;
And my tears cure nothing.
I'm veiled with your rust.

I melt,
In the slightest of warmth
from your body.
Your insufferable lust.

You led me up the mountain
With a peak of gold.
I see the sun setting now.
Until it's gone,
I want you to stay with me

- Nabaneet

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This is my first post, so a little nervous ;p . What y'all think?
Ocean mind


Is it what I'm placed for? or its that one wave carrying a pace of flow on constant, searching for a shore to let it out.

Unknown of what shore to go towards and what flow to carry on.

To most of the shores seems similar and not every sand is comfortable.


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(p.s- thats how I relate with my name and nature of its meaning)
Death's friend

So my brother, have you seen death?
Is it the sun at the horizon,
Or my mother's warm caress?
Is it a lonesome singing bard,
Or is it a dead man nailed to a cross?

Is it the morning pearldrops on the field,
Or it is the sparkling creek,
gurgling in its path through the rocks;
Is it the sound of seagulls at the shore, to a seaman,
Or the rustling yellow leaves in a quiet autumnal evening?

Is it the good old moon at night,
peeping at me through the foliage?
Or is it the smiling face of my lover
with ivory wings on her back?

Is it a Valkyrie on her elegant white horse, fetching my soul to Valhalla?
Or is it a poor countryman offering his summer's harvest to the Almighty?

Tell me brother, for I crave to know.
For I crave to witness, the beauty of the end.
For I crave to be one, with the great ball of fire.
For I crave, to be death's only friend.

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Finally, it was me and her
No one else in the world but
Just two of us, all alone.
We were gathered by silences,
Hiding in the dark night and
Trying to find a lost dawn
My eyes were restless as if they had been sleepless since centuries, the moment
I turned to her, I missed my step and falled
On ground.
There was no one to save me from falling.
I realized that I woke.

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When it is all over

When she has left you
You will be tempted to answer stupid questions
Like;
Was I caring enough?
Was I good enough?
Was I handsome enough?
Was I too shabby?
Was I smart enough?
How about my public figures?
Too loud?
Too emotional?
What if I just kept quiet?km
Was I supposed to apologise even when I'm right?
Was I too fast with my responses?
Maybe I wasn't a good listener?
Maybe I pushed too hard?
Maybe I didn't fight hard enough?
Maybe I’m too afraid to lose myself?

Trust me, do no do it
It'll only leave you aching for days.


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DEATH BY FIRE, WATER, EARTH AND AIR

Catching fire, his burning desire is placed on the pyre.

Left to drown, still dressed in the most beautiful gown, she casts a final glance at her crown

Being at war with nature, he can't reason with the creature. The one that would stop him from laying eyes on his future.

Gasping for air, she's in total despair. She realizes, nothing is ever really fair.

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Sometimes I wish
My shoulders didn’t know
How it feels to be
In your arms

Sometimes I wish
Your eyes didn’t show
How it feels to be
In your attention

Sometimes I wish
We never met
Because every moment away from you
Is a punishment



#meg
CHOICESCHOICES•

Fear and panic causes tragedy
Make your mind up
So you don’t get caught up in traffic
Mesmerizing pain causing harm to your brain
If you think you’re so fly, why don’t you join the train
Take a ride through memory lane
Obscure safety measures so you don’t end up in loving
You hate to see it but I promise it won’t happen
False prophets are who poor people believe in
Vulnerability might be a weakness for believing
Marx says religion is the opium of the masses
The labor tend to pray when their world is in crisis
So, do we have to take things in our own hands like the Isis?
Or will our leaders still be tossing us like we are dices
"Die Sis" her brother would voice out to her
6 abortions and they would never stay with her
5 abominations and the last she never took care
4 potions and she will not dare
3 concussions and she will never lear
2 safety precautions and she will never wear
1 information about life is so rare

Oscar Aboki👑
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Be aware or Strong

Be unaware of how painful living can be
Oblivious of the constant turmoil human relationship brings
Let ignorance lead your cause of happiness
Making sure your head is always in the sand
May thy eyes never hit the heart of men
Unraveling how dark and wicked it is
Be unaware my love
Be unaware

Or

Be strong
Be strong my love
Maintaining a steady gait as men pour their wickedness on all you hold dear
And always be in pursuit of knowledge; it indeed separates most
Let meaningful work lead your course of happiness
With due diligence, conquer the turmoil that resides in you and amigos
Assuring thyself that pain is just an ingredient of living and the strong cooks the best meal with it

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CHAPTER-1
HIS DREAMS

Charlie leapt out of his bed earshot the alarm went off. It was approximately 8 am and his school bus would be arriving at about quarter past eight. He rushed off to the washroom to take a bath and wore his outfit speedily. He settled down to eat the breakfast his mom Annie prepared for him.
As he was eating his breakfast he heard the heavy horn of the school bus and rode off to it, leaving half of the fraction of his sandwich behind.

Charlie was a prominent figure in his school, though he was an introvert and didn’t have many pals, thanks to his high ranks and his position as the forward in the football team. He had a high IQ and a well-built body, especially for an 18-year-old. He loved science and while other students found it exceptionally exhausting, he was curious, particularly about outer space. Whether it had aliens? What was holding the universe together? Where do the cosmos end? Etc….

Although Charlie doesn't have many friends, he had one good friend named Tyler. He was Charlie’s
neighbour and was with him right from his
childhood. He was always with him in every adventure of his life. But he wasn't anticipating to be with him in the upcoming one even though they didn't know about that.

Time went as unhurriedly as every common day in the school, soon came his favourite period Science,
And the topic was about time. There arrived the question if an individual can see the past. He forthwith stood up and reacted that if someone notices the stars at night, they are glimpsing years past the present time as the light from the stars take years to reach us. The whole class gazed him as if he was an alien. Even the teacher stood there stunned. But that only added to his dream of exploring the macrocosm

His thoughtful psyche was filled with curiosity, which he can't even get the answers from his school. He asked Tyler about his doubts but he stood there with his face as he doesn't even know a thing. His wonder about the outer space was confusing his mind.

They got out of their school bus and was slowly strolling back towards their respective homes. He began to open the door but it was sealed he unzipped his bag and grabbed the key he had in his possession and opened the door. He took a bottle of orange juice out from the fridge and took a gulp of it to overcome his thirst. He was very weary from the day at school. He immediately climbed to his room and fell down on his couch without even changing his dress.


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That day he didn't eat anything except breakfast. He kept lying on his bed and thought about every element of the dream. He was sure that he had seen that exact visual somewhere else but he doesn't remember them. "I am going through a deja vu" he inquired himself. He got exhausted after a while and fell into sleep

No….. "Where I am going?"…..(light flashes)..."So this is a black hole ". "If this is what I think this is then why am I not dead"…..He arose jumping out of bed. That dream occurred to him again. But it had begun to frighten him. The same thing he adored a day back, now he was terrified by it

What is this dream of mine?…

Is it real?……

He asked himself. What he didn't know was that he was going to get his answers soon enough
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This is just the sample of the first chapter
I need to expand the story to a 10-15 page first chapter

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Words of wisdom, words of truth
Two despicable minds of a youth
By the power vested in me
Post transgression dawned on me
So impeccable, so divine
My life in your hands you’ll redefine
Must be dreaming if you were mine
Clarified expressions slow the mind
Hope for love and hope for life
Draw your sword or throw your knife
Murder went silent like the 'K' in knife
Life is too short, lend me your heels
We could exchange for a million meals
Too much for clout for a million views
People you don’t even know with million hues
Peace and love flow through my mind
Separate myself from relentless fools
Sip on my wine and enjoying views
Music on my mind is jazz and blues
Swimming in the alcohol intoxicated cruise
Left your mark up in my mind
The past is not the present I can’t look behind


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Once again I call on you and you don’t answer
Once again I long for your touch but you’re nowhere closer
I have no choice but to appreciate our every moment
Was never upright but you guided me with my every movement
I write this with tears in my eyes I cannot hold back
From my scarred heart I spill out my words,for you left a mark
Stone hearted warrior I was but my heart you did crack
I cannot be lost cause you taught me these ways
Wish they knew what I hold back don’t know how this weighs
Blood of my blood, soul up bringer
Giver of life you’ve made my heart linger
I try to forget this pain but my heart grows fonder
Lord give me strength and wisdom
I know you’re in a better place
You left my space
Your space I can’t replace
What a huge void!!
Second year and you’re still not here to celebrate with me
I still thank God for life and give him all the glory



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SUMMER'S SUN AND THE MEMORY'S

Below the densest clouds
My old memories
Waiting outside in the
Hot afternoon sun
For the white night.

Sweat all over me
The body trembles
By a touch of
The heat of summer sun.

Summer is real like a dream
So astonishing near
Having cool winds
Gently envelopes the memory's
Of having you beside me.

Missing those day's
Are the hardest
Bringing back all the memories.

I love summer,
I love it's cold, breezy weather
Sometimes cloud covering sun.
The bright colours added more
Flavour than before.

Playing on sand
Building home
Before the wave crash in.
Sleeping in grass.

Swimming on the beach
Beaches Shinning with golden sand
Like to stride on sea shore
and I fell in love.

Suffering on identify and
Using such great chance to hold you
The beautiful blue ocean
With the heat of summer sun.
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It was the midnight of the june, the gloomy sky with no moon, cluster of stars were trying to shimmer but amber like lamp was the best from my room.

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