{..... Theses all started to begin from the big bang, it opened up a new chapter,a chapter of heavenly bodies within the domain of this boundless universe. This new chapter gave rise to our planet Earth that paved the way for a new era , the era of life. Life on Earth under evolutionary changes brought a superior speicies with in the era that has been gifted with the potential to think.
This outstanding species discovered a thing that governs the universal laws, changing its life from stones to satellites.
This is the story of how the foundation for a modernized world was made,that even cost miserable sacrifices of mankind
This is the story of Mathematics..... }
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This outstanding species discovered a thing that governs the universal laws, changing its life from stones to satellites.
This is the story of how the foundation for a modernized world was made,that even cost miserable sacrifices of mankind
This is the story of Mathematics..... }
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#everyone
#review
#needsuggestions
#Alex
Writers please help to make this passage looking good..
Suggest the corrections to be made.. Please🙏🙏🙏
The world screams ruthless and selfish
As the bull storms out the field,
Only I see the lone wolf hidden in his heart
Cause that's my man, I wouldn't give up!
I reach the footsteps of the temple,
I'd proudly own as it's all mine,
The holy sanctuary that bears his hearts,
Beats in cacophony to the trumpets of life;
The demon you see, he's my monastery,
As my freezing fingers calm his burning nerves,
Just as his ears and nose turn red in anger,
My lips finds his, he begins meditating .
The nape of his neck evaporate heat,
Reminds me of a hundred burning lamps;
But those eyes give me a rush, I don't wanna miss
There's a volcano of rage his body hides;
I'm still diving deep into an uncertain ocean,
Here I go without a safety gear, overlooking every flaw of his !
Because this demon you see is mine !
#poem #review #everyone #hannah
As the bull storms out the field,
Only I see the lone wolf hidden in his heart
Cause that's my man, I wouldn't give up!
I reach the footsteps of the temple,
I'd proudly own as it's all mine,
The holy sanctuary that bears his hearts,
Beats in cacophony to the trumpets of life;
The demon you see, he's my monastery,
As my freezing fingers calm his burning nerves,
Just as his ears and nose turn red in anger,
My lips finds his, he begins meditating .
The nape of his neck evaporate heat,
Reminds me of a hundred burning lamps;
But those eyes give me a rush, I don't wanna miss
There's a volcano of rage his body hides;
I'm still diving deep into an uncertain ocean,
Here I go without a safety gear, overlooking every flaw of his !
Because this demon you see is mine !
#poem #review #everyone #hannah
Human destroyed the nature,
God decided to punish his creature.
Earth is healing, but still needs more time,
Human felt the change and
mere a reflection of sins.
This quarantine is not just for us,
It is the time nature needed indeed,
To purify, to nourish and to feed.
Maybe this is the fate,
To nurture love and end this hate.
The air seems to be more refreshing,
The birds are chirping again on trees,
The water is clearer as it was never ever,
The trees are getting greener,
The streets are cleaner.
Maybe this was ultimate play,
Maybe this is the ultimate punishment,
Maybe this was pre-planned.
#poetry #quarantine #R #review
God decided to punish his creature.
Earth is healing, but still needs more time,
Human felt the change and
mere a reflection of sins.
This quarantine is not just for us,
It is the time nature needed indeed,
To purify, to nourish and to feed.
Maybe this is the fate,
To nurture love and end this hate.
The air seems to be more refreshing,
The birds are chirping again on trees,
The water is clearer as it was never ever,
The trees are getting greener,
The streets are cleaner.
Maybe this was ultimate play,
Maybe this is the ultimate punishment,
Maybe this was pre-planned.
#poetry #quarantine #R #review
You led me into thorns when you held unto my horns
The thorns sparkled like stars because i thought i was sky
I bought them with my treasured heart
It was frozen into glass
You dropped it on a tile at last
My heart splashed suicide so couldn't respond arrrhg!
Now you ask me if I felt pain
No pain no gain so i thought cool
My brain was on but the power was cut
It was no pain but an organ loss
#review #everyone #poem
The thorns sparkled like stars because i thought i was sky
I bought them with my treasured heart
It was frozen into glass
You dropped it on a tile at last
My heart splashed suicide so couldn't respond arrrhg!
Now you ask me if I felt pain
No pain no gain so i thought cool
My brain was on but the power was cut
It was no pain but an organ loss
#review #everyone #poem
you dont get to tell me
what kind of man i am!
I've been with myself more than enough
That i can define the shape of my soul
That resides within
#review #alchemist #micropoetry
what kind of man i am!
I've been with myself more than enough
That i can define the shape of my soul
That resides within
#review #alchemist #micropoetry
#review
#random_thought
#article
Silence, oh I love its presence may be because am a shy person, or don't wanna talk unnecessarily, or don't wanna come into unwanted arguments or I just love quietness and loneliness. It can be anyone of the reasons for what I love it. I know there are a lot more reasons for this attachment which I currently don't know, or may be which I don't want to accept, just because they expose my weak sections, bad parts, spoiled habits!? Okay! Now am confused about myself and things which I love. See, I contradicted myself. But, for a past few days in this so called quarantine zone due to pandemic has forced me to question myself that "Do I really like love this silence!?". However, I have been in touch with quarantine zone for a while now which was before this pandemic. But this invisible pressure am experiencing right now due to lockdown, I can't define it. It has made me psychologically handicapped. I know it's all in my head but this feeling of "stay inside" has got me!
#Mr_Nobody
#random_thought
#article
Silence, oh I love its presence may be because am a shy person, or don't wanna talk unnecessarily, or don't wanna come into unwanted arguments or I just love quietness and loneliness. It can be anyone of the reasons for what I love it. I know there are a lot more reasons for this attachment which I currently don't know, or may be which I don't want to accept, just because they expose my weak sections, bad parts, spoiled habits!? Okay! Now am confused about myself and things which I love. See, I contradicted myself. But, for a past few days in this so called quarantine zone due to pandemic has forced me to question myself that "Do I really like love this silence!?". However, I have been in touch with quarantine zone for a while now which was before this pandemic. But this invisible pressure am experiencing right now due to lockdown, I can't define it. It has made me psychologically handicapped. I know it's all in my head but this feeling of "stay inside" has got me!
#Mr_Nobody
TEENAGE MIND
Feeling like everything is left behind,
And its true I just realised.
Keeping all the logging and memories side,
And running through a roller-coaster-ride.
When nothing feels right,
still I’m ready for every fight.
It seems for the future I am prepared,
but the thought of commitment is getting me scared.
Forgetting everything and a child I used to be,
And realising what all i’m doing is just for me.
There are many situations alone i’ve met,
Taking bigger steps whenever a chance I get, and then looking back with no regret.
Where everybody just gives a little hope.
I feel like its me who’s helping me to cope.
Almost lost and away from all,
Whenever I lose hope, I always fall.
People have colours and all they have shown,
Being in a crowd I still feel alone.
Whenever I trust people a little more,
They make me realise nobody cares anymore.
It makes me numb, it makes me lost,
Because all the limits they have crossed.
But not everyone is like that,
Because some people love me, with every contrast.
These feelings I feel, they’re different, they’re new.
being loved and adored by some is the reason my confidence grew.
Young by age, matured in the mind.
the little girl they want back is hard to find.🍀
-//#T
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#everyone
#poetry
#nopost
Feeling like everything is left behind,
And its true I just realised.
Keeping all the logging and memories side,
And running through a roller-coaster-ride.
When nothing feels right,
still I’m ready for every fight.
It seems for the future I am prepared,
but the thought of commitment is getting me scared.
Forgetting everything and a child I used to be,
And realising what all i’m doing is just for me.
There are many situations alone i’ve met,
Taking bigger steps whenever a chance I get, and then looking back with no regret.
Where everybody just gives a little hope.
I feel like its me who’s helping me to cope.
Almost lost and away from all,
Whenever I lose hope, I always fall.
People have colours and all they have shown,
Being in a crowd I still feel alone.
Whenever I trust people a little more,
They make me realise nobody cares anymore.
It makes me numb, it makes me lost,
Because all the limits they have crossed.
But not everyone is like that,
Because some people love me, with every contrast.
These feelings I feel, they’re different, they’re new.
being loved and adored by some is the reason my confidence grew.
Young by age, matured in the mind.
the little girl they want back is hard to find.🍀
-//#T
#review
#everyone
#poetry
#nopost
could see him
shaking his legs
sitting on his chair
his bright eyes filled with despair
stealing glances
filled with fear
sliding his hands
through his hairs
afraid to lose a little that he had
Confidence...
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shaking his legs
sitting on his chair
his bright eyes filled with despair
stealing glances
filled with fear
sliding his hands
through his hairs
afraid to lose a little that he had
Confidence...
#review #alchemist #poem
She was calling me through her playful eyes,
To play a lusty game of cat and mice,
She whispered softly come inside,
To find the beauty beyond her white dress that she hide,
She will be seashore and I will be tide.
And room will be before sunrise where we unite.
#martian #review #micropoetry #prompt #pictureprompt
To play a lusty game of cat and mice,
She whispered softly come inside,
To find the beauty beyond her white dress that she hide,
She will be seashore and I will be tide.
And room will be before sunrise where we unite.
#martian #review #micropoetry #prompt #pictureprompt
A new day is Rising,
Birds are Chirping
Everyone has started doing their work
And it's the situation where I got struck.
Everyone is Working,
While, I'm still Dreaming
No enjoyment with Friends,
No support from Family
And it's Me,
Sitting in a room
With thousands of creative ideas,
In my Mind
#poetry #writrr #review
Birds are Chirping
Everyone has started doing their work
And it's the situation where I got struck.
Everyone is Working,
While, I'm still Dreaming
No enjoyment with Friends,
No support from Family
And it's Me,
Sitting in a room
With thousands of creative ideas,
In my Mind
#poetry #writrr #review
Opened the door, I tried to go out
I just needed to cross the line
Then like others, I could hang out.
To me, I just say, "Fine, Fine, Fine."
#Asay #everyone #review #micropoetry #tobecontinued
I just needed to cross the line
Then like others, I could hang out.
To me, I just say, "Fine, Fine, Fine."
#Asay #everyone #review #micropoetry #tobecontinued
A Mysterious House,
A Strange Girl lived
She used to observe everyone,
Out from the window.
Sometimes the door was open
And Sometimes the door was closed.
No one ever knew about her weird behavior
An Investigation discovered that
There was nothing in that House,
But a soul
With, A Dream to Live
#review #writrr #poetry #everyone #prompt #pictureprompt
A Strange Girl lived
She used to observe everyone,
Out from the window.
Sometimes the door was open
And Sometimes the door was closed.
No one ever knew about her weird behavior
An Investigation discovered that
There was nothing in that House,
But a soul
With, A Dream to Live
#review #writrr #poetry #everyone #prompt #pictureprompt
I want to express myself Why can't I standup? Why am I sweating ? Why can't I speak now? Why am I mumbling ? Why am I odd? Why can't I be normal? I want to go home. #socialanxiety #poem #review #sn #
*Prague*
"you have to jump into the abyss!"
a loud yet cold voice rang inside his head
He looked down once again, pitch darkness could be seen everywhere, there were various crystal on both side of the walls which gave an eerie vibe when you stare at the them for more than a moment. He could tell Even if somehow he miraculously survived the fall he could get a fatal injury just by a slight touch of the rocks.
"if you want to survive, you have to jump right now !" the voice once again reminded him that they were short on time and he could be caught any moment. The voice was indifferent yet he could tell even the words were said in a panic.
" this is all f**ked up!, arent angels supposed to be good? Where the f**k is god right now? " his words were contradicting his knowledge ,he knew the only way to survive this situation even by a miracle was to jump into the abyss. he was in a dire state.
To be continued......
#lightnovel #alchemist #review
I want to know if this can be a good start or not.
"you have to jump into the abyss!"
a loud yet cold voice rang inside his head
He looked down once again, pitch darkness could be seen everywhere, there were various crystal on both side of the walls which gave an eerie vibe when you stare at the them for more than a moment. He could tell Even if somehow he miraculously survived the fall he could get a fatal injury just by a slight touch of the rocks.
"if you want to survive, you have to jump right now !" the voice once again reminded him that they were short on time and he could be caught any moment. The voice was indifferent yet he could tell even the words were said in a panic.
" this is all f**ked up!, arent angels supposed to be good? Where the f**k is god right now? " his words were contradicting his knowledge ,he knew the only way to survive this situation even by a miracle was to jump into the abyss. he was in a dire state.
To be continued......
#lightnovel #alchemist #review
I want to know if this can be a good start or not.