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Purpose is what gives life a meaning. Every action done, every word uttered and every thought should have a purpose.

Some people utter useless words, this saying by Plato is a whip to them *“wise men speak because they have something to say; fools because they have to say something”* .

We should set a goal for ourselves in life and act towards the goal. *“If what you are doing is not moving you towards your goals then its moving you away from your goals” says Brain Tracy* .

The length of the stalk of lotus is as much as the level of water; similarly if your aims are high and purpose is of great level, achievements also will be great.

Aimless life is led only by animals and humans who have the sixth sense should lead a life with purpose

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I'm someone you can't relay on
I'm kind of water that kindles fire on

Kind of storm, can never be slow down.
I'm fire, So just can't play around.

You see me and your eyes glow
Sorry, but I have a long way to go.

I tripped, couldn't carry on.
I turned and I'm alone.

I don't want to go, only if i can hide
Wound is deep and feel like dead inside

I used to be emotionally numb
Bound to be not connect

But it's all you in me now
In all the memories of me, I collect

I ha
It's too late now to decide

I'm literally falling for you
Or I'm falling for lie

I was aloof but now everything is you, I adore.


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Fishermen

For the warmth of your fire I keep you close,
Seeking a desire that is in a way, enclosed.

Elevating my temperature higher,
Flooding my veins, overdosed.

Yet to discover the element,
the source of the energy you acquire,
But Who am I to read beyond the written?
to get it disclosed.

Isn't the mystery of pulling a wire,
that keeps the fishermen skin grow drier ?
Or is the glass still water leaving the twisted thrill exposed?

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the tricky part was
to push you out of my heart
in a way that
i dont end up tearing myself apart.

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The moonlight dances
on her toes
perfectly nailing
each and every move
waiting for the sun
to hand over the stage
so she can finally perform
under his glow
until her feet
bleed to death

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The moonlight dances
on her toes
perfectly nailing
each and every move
waiting for the sun
So she can hand over the stage
And finally perform
under his glow
until her feet
Bleed to death

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Childhood is like a closed door filled with memories, aromas, summers, holidays, cartoons and friends.

There are wardrobes full of things, like the memories od your dance costumes.

You can only visit this space once in a while and feel all the things you've ever felt so deeply, but you cannot forever live there as you or your childhood friends don't.
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You

Another night is gone
In this golden prison of mine
Your eyes, apocalypse of sunsets
Won’t come back

I craved for your body;
Like a dying man or a corpse
I don’t see your lips
Chasing me.

Another night ,
And you will fade out
An eloquent dream
A broken thought
The last sip of beauty; in this universe of sorrow.

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Ugh
Everyone is married, their lives are sorted,
Even the guy I had a crush on,
When I was at school
He's with a toddler now.

But why do I want to know,
What happened to the people from my memories.
Besides we only remained good friends, nothing more, nothing less.

It feels like they've set their pace,
Sorted every strand of life,
And I'm where I am.
Standing in the sands of time.

At a flick of a moment,
I'm that girl from school,
And suddenly I'm not.
Is this what growing up means?

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HUMAN (Our blue)
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Litmus!
we're that flexible paper
that react with reagents
acid and base
water and blood
Salt and stones
we're litmus papers

In the laboratory of life
We're very useless
Not significant
We only change colour
We cannot react.

Our colours are not special
weak and feeble
Fading fakes
They are very predictable
In the laboratory of life

We're bad people
Covered with skin
Perforated one
hairless furs

gorgeous in garments
Suite and tie
Iró or gown
Agbádá or shirts
Danshiki or Búbá

Yet we're bad people
Filled with blood
Full of gore
Sand and dust

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What does it take to write so emotionally?
Oh nothing much, actually.
Take a look at a stabbed wound from within
Feel the complex ways it tingles you
And put it all out on an app
Without your real name.

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You thought i would never leave,
I heard from your friends.
But feelings change dear, the love also fades.
You thought I'd never move on, or tell you good bye.
You thought I'd never forget about you and I.
Ohh silly,who do you think you are?
My feelings for you are now far done.
Of course I loved you, I thought it would last
But "loved"....."e" "d" babe it is all in the past.

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PURIFINER.....
Like a refiner, he sat
Purifier of my soul
Definer of my service
Desperately, I yearned
Impatiently, I waited
Uncertain of my fate
What would it be?
with silver or gold or
in the furnace of affliction?

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Ages of the Gods
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In the beginning, the whole universe was void and full of darkness. Not even a solar system existed to form any galaxy. Not a single sun. Not a planet nor asteroid. Everything was void and dark. The only light source which existed was the Spirit of God Himself.
Spirit of God was quiet in the void. He was thinking a solution for this chaos. After thinking for a while, His wisdom and knowledge became perfect. He was ready to start the creation.
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Live, learn, love, life, lose.
Long time ago a long gray man loudly said,
Live life;
Learn love.
Long time ago a long bearded man loudly said,
Lose love,
Learn life.
Long time ago a long black man loudly said,
Learn lose,
Live life.

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Humans beings are members of a whole
In creating of one essence and soul
If one member is afflicted with pain
Other members uneasy will remain
If you’ve no sympathy for human pain
The name of human you cannot retain
(Saadi shirazi) #poem #review #efi

Deep in the Sea,
A group of Humans lived
whom had evolved themselves,
To stay in the water.
I asked them that why they did so?
They said that,
It is better to live inside sea with various friendly creatures
Than to live on land
which is going to be destroyed,
By Thoughtless Humans.

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This is how it started...
The first time I saw you, you walked into the class in two pigtails, school uniform and a bracelet in your hand, looking so cute that I couldn't take my eyes off you. I wanted the time to stop, so that I could gaze all day long at you, at those beautiful eyes. I couldn't take my eyes off you. You were new in the class. The whole class was staring at you. And why wouldn't they.. you were the prettiest of 'em all. The teacher asked you to introduce yourself and your name was as lovely as you were. I didn't know, was it your name , your eyes or you.. I was in love with. Then you were asked to sit next to me and when I heard that I got goosebumps. I had never seen such gorgeous eyes before, I couldn't stop myself from staring at you. And then, you smiled.. that damn smile was enough to drive me crazy...
This was how it started.
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This is how it started...
The first time I saw you, you walked into the class in two pigtails, school uniform and a bracelet in your hand, looking so cute that I couldn't take my eyes off you. I wanted the time to stop, so that I could gaze all day long at you, at those beautiful eyes. I couldn't take my eyes off you. You were new in the class. The whole class was staring at you. And why wouldn't they.. you were the prettiest of 'em all. The teacher asked you to introduce yourself and your name was as lovely as you were. I didn't know, was it your name , your eyes or you.. I was in love with. Then you were asked to sit next to me and when I heard that I got goosebumps. I had never seen such gorgeous eyes before, I couldn't stop myself from staring at you. And then, you smiled.. that damn smile was enough to drive me crazy...
This was how it started.
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Just wanted to share...

I fell for your eyes,

Looking into them, makes me feel like I am drowning.

I fell for your face,

Looking at it, makes me feel amusing.

I fell for your skin,

Touching it, makes me feel as if it was meant for me.

I fell for you, because of what you were, are and will be. 

I fell for the whole of you.


I gave you the key to myself.

I gave you the steering of my car.

I gave you the right to control me.

I gave you my heart,

without even knowing if you wanted it or not.


My mistake was not to know your wishes.

My mistake was not to know what you really wanted.

My mistake was to assume everything as you wanted.

My mistake was that I fell for you?


Whatever it may be, I don't regret it.

Whatever it may be, I will always think of your betterment.

Whatever it may be, it was surely an experience of life.

Whatever it may be, I will never be able to hate you, ever.


What is love? 

Is it giving control of your life to the other half?

Is it thinking about them in every moment of your life?

Is it that you can never forget the other half?

Or is it just a feeling that fades away with time?


For me,

Love is caring.

Love is becoming.

Love is finding.

Love just happens.

It can never be forced.


But,

will it ever fade away?

Will it ever erase from the heart?

Will it ever become an unknown?

Will it ever occur again?


The culprit, mind, 

Is laughing at me like I am the biggest fool.

It tells me, it's simple, move on,

Yet I couldn't.

It tells me, it's simple, forget you,

Yet I couldn't.

It tells me, it's simple, just kill you,

Yet, I couldn't.

It tells me, it's simple, either you or me,

Yet, I couldn't.


Even though I know that it is ideal for me to move on.

Even though I know that it is ideal for me to forget you.

Even though I know that it is ideal for me to kill you from my mind.

Even though I know that it is ideal for me to choose me.


But,

fortunately, I know that you are sad,

fortunately, I know that you are lonely,

fortunately, I know that you need strong support,

fortunately, I know that you need someone who could make you feel alive again.


That makes my ideal decisions a joke.

That makes my mind think again if what I will do will be good or not.

That makes my heart beats again with a reason.

That makes my whole me, just worry about you.


I lost myself in the process of loving you.

I lost myself in the process of expecting equal love from you.

I lost myself in the process of making our different worlds, one.

I lost myself in the process of improving myself for you.


And the problem begins,

I think we are one, yet you may think differently.

I think we can help each other, yet you may differ.

I think we can tackle all the problems together, yet you may differ.

I think we can support each other, yet I have no idea what you think.


Just know,

I trust you.

I believe you.

I like you.

I love you.


But hey, we can't get a happy ending you know.

You have self-doubts that stop you from moving ahead.

I have a lack of confidence that stops me from growing myself.

You have various insecurities that you want to overcome.

And I have this insecurity that you will leave me for good.


But there is nothing we can do about it, 

Untill we overcome,

our self-doubts,

our lack of confidence,

our insecurties,

and our fears.


World is a beautiful place,

Why not explore it together?

Life is so wonderful,

Why not live it together?



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