Slowly sinking
in the bathtub of death
he holds his breath
listening to the blurred hymn
of a thousand faces
that makes his hearbeat
cringe to the extent
that he himself
envelopes his soul
around his lungs
and presents it to the devil...

#review #alchemist #poetry

A Companion In Need

Even though a man has friends,
He is alone inside
There is no one around him who can understand his feelings

He needs a companion,
Either a boy or a girl,
But a soul that can sense his emotions

There are many people in the world,
But all we have to find is
A Good Companionship

#review #writrr #poetry

What do i want?
What do i strive for
What do i need
What do i crave for
What is it that is missing
Why do i feel my soul shaking
Why am i so out of breath
Why am i so out of ways
Why is my heart trembling
My lungs are suffocating
What on earth am i looking for
What is my truth....what is my cure....

#review #poetry #G

#review I really felt every lines.

Reassurance

There is a chain in the tree,
old and full of rust.
It's locked.

How did it got there?
How long has it been there?
I ask myself,
sitting outside in the
morning sun.

Noone knows,
but the thought that
it will stay there
after I'm gone makes
me smile

#poem #000 #review

It's my first attempt to write a poem so I'm grateful for every hint of improvement.

Temporary Corona-fied

It's crawling up,
It's grabbing minds,
It's standing still,
It's digging deep.

The thing to get
into everyone's head.
The thought to stir
a fever of old.

I see them cry,
I hear their fear,
I know their pain
and I understand.

#review #Shadowfall #poem

& i guess
I should have
Known from the start
true love
Is often carved out of scars....

#alchemist #review

Just a thought...

Don't look into her eyes
That's where her demons hide.
Dying, she gives a smile to the world
Who has always been so unkind.
She wishes every day
To be her last one
She was full of dreams
But now she has none.
Her new best friends
Were the darkness and sadness
She made her life.
A huge mess
Her thoughts were
Destroying her
She wished to get
Things back like they were
Her scars were fading,
She felt so lost
So she held her blades again
and made herself bleed a lot
Just a little happiness
was what she always asked for
But she lost herself instead.
Now she doesn't smile anymore.

#review #soul #poem

Why do i feel like
something is missing
when you were never
mine to begin with
#alchemist #review #micropoetry

I used to be scared
trapped in the mortal realm
of losing my life
at the age of twelve

I used to think
human life is too short
for me to spread my wings
so i started looking for god

I found him one day
When i went to bed
He was sitting right beside me
With his fingers on my head

and i asked him
why did he curse us all
why do we have ti turn to dust
as time unfolds?

he looked at me
and gave me a faint little smile
and told me that
once he was also a child

he too went
to the door of death
he too died
it was his karma that lived...

#alchemist #review
#poem

I was lost,
In the sea of light
Darkness stepped on my shadow.

I was found
In your arms
A kingdom of sorrow.

Death is at my doorstep
I won’t survive again
Your last kiss
Your last kiss
Will shake my soul.

I disappear.

#poem #dannunzio #review

Words from an oppressed to an oppressed

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
You are sold,
You sold yourself,
By your own hands,
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
To to a free person,
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Yeah he is free,
But still a slave of his mind,
His own ego which he has made,
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
You both are sold,
I am crazy I am crazy,
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
I am naked I am naked,
You are wearing clothes,
They are your status,
Ha Ha Ha Ha
But they are prison,
You are prisoner,
Ha Ha Ha Ha
Lord! Save this world.
Save me! Save us all!

#martian #review #prose

Fishermen

For the warmth of your fire I keep you close,
Seeking a desire that is in a way, enclosed.

Elevating my temperature higher,
Flooding my veins, overdosed.

Yet to discover the element,
the source of the energy you acquire,
But Who am I to read beyond the written?
to get it disclosed.

Isn't the mystery of pulling a wire,
that keeps the fishermen skin grow drier ?
Or is the glass still water leaving the twisted thrill exposed?

#Review #Aj #peom #everyone

Sacred and lost


In the night,
I see you again.
And then you are lost.

Your indifference in this glass
I was among the ghosts of my selves
I was a drop.

I remember your face and the wine
And you were just a mirror
Of my countless desires.

Are you, the rest of my will?
Are you, the Woman I chased?
Or you are the plague
The final judgment of my soul

Unborn thoughts are chasing me
Like your arms, your dreamy easy
Chasing me, in the fearful night.

#review #dannunzio #poem #love

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Every sidenote helps.

Purpose is what gives life a meaning. Every action done, every word uttered and every thought should have a purpose.

Some people utter useless words, this saying by Plato is a whip to them *“wise men speak because they have something to say; fools because they have to say something”* .

We should set a goal for ourselves in life and act towards the goal. *“If what you are doing is not moving you towards your goals then its moving you away from your goals” says Brain Tracy* .

The length of the stalk of lotus is as much as the level of water; similarly if your aims are high and purpose is of great level, achievements also will be great.

Aimless life is led only by animals and humans who have the sixth sense should lead a life with purpose

#review #everyone #love

I'm someone you can't relay on
I'm kind of water that kindles fire on

Kind of storm, can never be slow down.
I'm fire, So just can't play around.

You see me and your eyes glow
Sorry, but I have a long way to go.

I tripped, couldn't carry on.
I turned and I'm alone.

I don't want to go, only if i can hide
Wound is deep and feel like dead inside

I used to be emotionally numb
Bound to be not connect

But it's all you in me now
In all the memories of me, I collect

I ha
It's too late now to decide

I'm literally falling for you
Or I'm falling for lie

I was aloof but now everything is you, I adore.


#Vivektavinita #Review #poem

Fishermen

For the warmth of your fire I keep you close,
Seeking a desire that is in a way, enclosed.

Elevating my temperature higher,
Flooding my veins, overdosed.

Yet to discover the element,
the source of the energy you acquire,
But Who am I to read beyond the written?
to get it disclosed.

Isn't the mystery of pulling a wire,
that keeps the fishermen skin grow drier ?
Or is the glass still water leaving the twisted thrill exposed?

#Review #Aj #peom #everyone

the tricky part was
to push you out of my heart
in a way that
i dont end up tearing myself apart.

#review #alchemist #micropoetry

The moonlight dances
on her toes
perfectly nailing
each and every move
waiting for the sun
to hand over the stage
so she can finally perform
under his glow
until her feet
bleed to death

#review #alchemist #poem

The moonlight dances
on her toes
perfectly nailing
each and every move
waiting for the sun
So she can hand over the stage
And finally perform
under his glow
until her feet
Bleed to death

#review #alchemist #poem