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Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love our family member
If not include family then I must say that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼

For understand someone needs feeling
But more a time some are understand but never show
Just have patience
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War destroyed everything.
But still, there was a tiny seedling growing from its ruins.

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Love:
I believe that it is best feelings
When first time I saw a Rose flower
I fall in Love with it
It make me smile
The best feelings from bottom of my heart










But when I closely to that flower
And try to touch ; the Thorne pierced
It's painful
Firstly I don't know it will hurt me too
Gave me pain ; after that feelings
But still I love that flower

Infront of my happiness that pain is nothing
I care for my feelings 🙏🏼

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Devil's call

One one one, Wake-up, it’s a call.
Two two two, end all your bonds.
Three three three, you have just one track.
Four four four, do not look back.
Five five five, it's a momentum towards death.
Six six six, I am a devil in your bed.

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Its her.

The day i know the date i dont.
Finding familiar faces amidst unknown,
That's when something striked me.
Eagerly searching for who it was.
Found a girl who was different from others.
The attitude she carried,
The smile on her face,
Made me do nothing but to gaze,
Her beauty in those sparkling eyes.
Luck brought us to friendship,
And i was on my quest to know her.
But with those years of friendship,
Am still on my ship heading towards her.
The cuteness at words the carefree look,
The maturity that reflects through words.
All keeps me driving on her beautiful path.
Hoping the time keeps it precious,
Don't want the change
As change don't deserve her.

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From a sailor
................;
Ought we have sort
Ought we have fought
To abort this feeling of loneliness
A gesture explained by many experienced by some
A subtle wave
That  we happen to find flowing inside us ,
OF
OUR  COMING HOME

Yes ! We find laughter in small talks
We get low on getting smoky shots
We celebrate each festival Like it's our last
Lest we still miss that single CALL
OF
OUR COMING HOME

Yes
We have kissed the sky
And
Chereished love from sea
Tough
We have also seen, listened and attended it's cries too
Lest we stood strong to behold our lover (ship) tight
Ignoring to let it loose in harsh days
She taught us
The way to live and strength to belive ,
A heart to pull the sorrows and a mind to be steep;
And we stocked all this in piles
For the ones that have waited Long
FOR
OUR HOME COMING.
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A mirage arrives, like a flawed wish
Shunting the walls of the mind
It haunts
It taunts
It flaunts, the shackles it brings
My hands tied
Eyes blind
The mirage walks, in its own stride
I go enraptured
Legs walks their own path
Slowly and steadily
Towards the valley of deep dark oasis
Never to return again..
Never to reborn again...

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*●Salvation In 10●*

Let there be light, out of nothing, the world was formed
Man wanted to stand tall, like Babel, but fell short
Kicked out of Eden, the outer world, a complete hazard
Then Cain sinned because he wasn't able to please God with his sacrifice
Things changed after Abraham and Moses
But it didn't bring enough shine, so the Son came down
So we could live a life ideal, milked with more grace
The car keys given to us to drive our way to eternity
Now that we are saved


●||The Scribe||●
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We were chilling in my room yesterday night telling stories about how our moms would punish us when we were little. Jack was quiet the whole time when he suddenly surprised us with his experience.
"Jock, my mom has only caned me three times,"he said. We all looked at him surprised since it was impossible to recall the number of times an African mother caned her child.
"Did grow up paradise before veing dropped on earth?" Sherry asked sarcastically.
"No," he said quietly.
"Then how comes your mom has punished you very few times?" I asked him still surprised.
"Those three times are the only times my mom caned me. The rest of the punishment sessions must have been attempted murders,"he said proudly looking satisfied with his statement. We looked at each other for a few seconds before bursting into laughter. He had made our day.
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*Beep*
As soon as he unplugged his phone from the charging port a notification from YouTube arrived. Plugging his earphone to watch the video he thought, ‘This will give the motivation I need to complete my work!’ His phone was still heating but at very less intensity as compared to half an hour before when he was playing games even while charging. He had some pending assignments to complete from which he had taken a break of 10 minutes which eventually lasted more than an hour. Since the deadline of those assignments was very far, he felt free to do it anytime soon but not at that moment. Well he was working on it when his phone gave him a warning about its temperature and so he had to put it down. But he was back at it again, though he was now watching the video, which he thinks was going to motivate him, and not playing games.

*Beep*
Just when the video ends, another notification arrives. It reads ‘It’s time to claim your reward and beat the enemies before they beat you!’ He opened the game as soon as he got the notification and lost in playing it.
Title of the video was: ‘Stop wasting your time and start utilising it!’

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One tight hug from the person you love is all you need when nothing's going right .
One hug from the right person and you start smiling all over again leaving all the tension , all the problems behind .
One hug from the right person is enough to motivate you , to over come each and every difficulty that comes in your way .
One hug is what matters the most .
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#review Hey friends...Please review
Airport Diaries"
I left his home like I left my solace and heading for despair. News struck me. The damage is done inside. I was in survival mode. Hardly breathing. I knew i wasnt courageous enough to end it. He was my life line. This was my only chance. I have to either move forward like a living dead.. or run back to him and live in pain of being the last option for him. But isnt pain good. Atleast pain meant i was alive and being human? Was life without any sensation worth?

When you hold my hand I fell strong ,
Iam the happiest person when you are around . When you hold my hand , I want the time stop , I want to live that moment for the rest of my life . I feel like I am the cutest person when you kiss my chicks . I went crazy when you said 'I love you' for the first time . And today I am left with nothing but the memories . I want to live those days again with you . I hope you can hear me , lets start it all over again and this time no misunderstandings , no fights , no egos , lets make it till the end how we wanted it to be .
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Last minutes to revelation

It's Snowing in my desert
Thoughts slowly forming,
flowing through narrow river
While, Avery taught me too...
dreams are all rested,
On the aisle of morning star.
Red wine making Intoxication..
Afterall I'm feeling numb inside.

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Descending stairs

Left behind a train of thought
Which I knew, will take me back
Smile and waved , hid truth inside
Cursed the moment but here atlast
During this ghostly charms, felt to
break the shell and fly away.
though as fabulous it'd be
How much can I fool myself when
I've got enough blood to bathe
and drown carelessly for
a peace of mind

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A pair of eyes, so beautiful
Full of life, so bountiful
A moment of weakness that passed by
Left my heart so empty so vacuumfull

I filled it up with moments, Of our so many so little talks
For i don't know how long it will be
Till the time, my destiny knocks...

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Not one drop of love..
Can she spare
For he waits..
Parched..
On the road to her heart..

A drop is all he needs
To keep afloat
On the ocean
Of tears
That wept from his heart

Mornings may bring the sunshine
But he is always fine
To find her in his bed
Radiant
Flamboyant
Silvery
For her face is lit like thousand suns
And cool of the moon

For now he goes
Like a free spirit
Kindered
By her light
With a smile on his face
In midst of all the avarice
Like a boon

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#Review The Guy at TT table

So, I was sucking at sport as always and this time particularly at table tennis and making an ass out of myself, until I met this short but affable guy, who was playing with his friends at the adjacent table, with a bunch of non-players like me. For every serve he plays and there goes the opponent’s bat right up the sky as if they were replicating the shots of MSD from world cup finale, and there was this chimpanzee jumping around the table as if it is not table tennis but ‘who wins the Super-Mario crown’, the other star fish girl, she is a real limelight stealer. It has been weeks since we used to play at our games arena post lunch and it has become my habit to observe these characters every day. and on one fine day I noticed improvement in each one of them. I mean come on, this society can’t straighten up a dog’s tail but something has surely taught these chimpanzees and star fish to play table tennis.

Then I remembered, it wasn’t much of a miracle because I recall hearing the phrases during our play, nice, awesome, what a shot, it will go – it will go, keep on, now that is called a shot and let me remind you these words of wisdom weren’t the ones, I heard post miracle. but those were the words of encouragement which has made the transformation during their naivety. Sometimes it happened so that, I have seen others play a normal pass and heard him praising and brimming each one of them with the confidence they needed to be in the field, to not give up because of some silly shots or because someone might be watching or laughing. because the aura that he was scintillating around that table, was sort of a shield to fight both the inner doubts and the outer prejudices to keep these at bay and lure them to just play with their full focus on the table.
And then I look back and ponder over my sport interests and see that bucket completely unused, and wishing to had someone like this ‘guy at the TT table’ at my early days of sporting. I guess we all have encountered this lack of support at different stages of our life, which could have made a huge impact on our lives to become what we all have always dreamt of. may be a supporting father for a salsa dancer, a supporting friend to win an argument, a supporting mother for a women cricket player, a good mentor to get you through the bridge and all it takes is the simplest words of encouragement in its purest form. Imagine the power of this composition of sound and vibrations which can be as transient as a real person’s effort, which can really help someone to jump from bad to good, good to better and to the best.

Wonder what a society would have been if we had so many like this ‘guy at the TT table’, around us, if we could just try to be like him once in a day. I believe we all can make a difference and make someone good at something with just two words of encouragement. I have mine, do you have yours?

Love is fine,
Love is shine,
Love is everything for mine...!!

Love is feeling,
Love is pain,
Love is every situation in medicine...!!

- Akash

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Oh dude, do you see
In me -- the kindled spree
The joyous and lovely me
In times when you set me free

Sristi

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