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Beat me to pulp
Till I lose consciousness
Burn me in public
Till I be nothing but ash
Drown me in sea
Till I lose my breathe
Choke me as you please
Till all I get is death

No. It is not what you see
it is not about dying.
It is about saving myself
from heartbreaks and crying.
So set me free before
Unbearable turns the pain.
For I have fallen in love with life
Ready to be hurt again.

#review
Trust is what it lacks (Acrostic)*

Time to play a game. How about some fun?
Related to people, so many yet none
Understand the rule before you play
Search for a hidden message by end of day
True, it may be boring or a tedious task
If you want an answer, it is your soul to ask
So many relationships prove out strong
Why, yet, some do not sustain for long?
How do people manage to stay together?
Against all odds they strive for better
Tougher may be times but they still manage
Infusing a vital thing to stay on same page
Try to find out what we have, what we lack
Love is there, yet this bond develops a crack
Ask for the reason behind stress and strain
Cause of which same questions rise again
Keep thinking about the missing thing for cure
Seek the answer within and you shall win for sure.

#review #acrostic
Paragraph 2 edited this way, so that's all woman will not be in the doldrums after reading.

Is the one who acted like a mother,
and cook me somethings to be wonder,
why would I be looking her to suffer.
#yourreview
What did this morning bring?
If not more of yesterday!




#review
Mustered courage
Picked up my pen
A hope to rekindle
My romance with words
But words faltered
So did my hope.

#review
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Have I met you before! You who questions my short span of attention, my fading interest, my indifference towards you, but forget to ask yourselves is there by any chance is it me causing you to succumb to this change.
Have I met you before! The fear of banters which runs through my veins, the confusion it creates for the rest of the day. It leaves me with not much options but the lurking aloofness all day.
Yes we have met!
Face is just a mask ,
Real beauty is always seen inside the heart.
-shailja
#review #quote
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Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love or family member
If not include family then I must that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼
#review
Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love our family member
If not include family then I must that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼
War destroyed everything.
But still, there was a tiny bloom from its ruins.

#review
#review
Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love our family member
If not include family then I must say that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼
For understand someone needs feeling
But more a time some are understand but never show
Just have patience
#review
War destroyed everything.
But still, there was a tiny seedling growing from its ruins.

#review
Love:
I believe that it is best feelings
When first time I saw a Rose flower
I fall in Love with it
It make me smile
The best feelings from bottom of my heart










But when I closely to that flower
And try to touch ; the Thorne pierced
It's painful
Firstly I don't know it will hurt me too
Gave me pain ; after that feelings
But still I love that flower

Infront of my happiness that pain is nothing
I care for my feelings 🙏🏼

#review
Devil's call

One one one, Wake-up, it’s a call.
Two two two, end all your bonds.
Three three three, you have just one track.
Four four four, do not look back.
Five five five, it's a momentum towards death.
Six six six, I am a devil in your bed.

#review #fun
Its her.

The day i know the date i dont.
Finding familiar faces amidst unknown,
That's when something striked me.
Eagerly searching for who it was.
Found a girl who was different from others.
The attitude she carried,
The smile on her face,
Made me do nothing but to gaze,
Her beauty in those sparkling eyes.
Luck brought us to friendship,
And i was on my quest to know her.
But with those years of friendship,
Am still on my ship heading towards her.
The cuteness at words the carefree look,
The maturity that reflects through words.
All keeps me driving on her beautiful path.
Hoping the time keeps it precious,
Don't want the change
As change don't deserve her.

#everyone #review
From a sailor
................;
Ought we have sort
Ought we have fought
To abort this feeling of loneliness
A gesture explained by many experienced by some
A subtle wave
That  we happen to find flowing inside us ,
OF
OUR  COMING HOME

Yes ! We find laughter in small talks
We get low on getting smoky shots
We celebrate each festival Like it's our last
Lest we still miss that single CALL
OF
OUR COMING HOME

Yes
We have kissed the sky
And
Chereished love from sea
Tough
We have also seen, listened and attended it's cries too
Lest we stood strong to behold our lover (ship) tight
Ignoring to let it loose in harsh days
She taught us
The way to live and strength to belive ,
A heart to pull the sorrows and a mind to be steep;
And we stocked all this in piles
For the ones that have waited Long
FOR
OUR HOME COMING.
#mylife #review
A mirage arrives, like a flawed wish
Shunting the walls of the mind
It haunts
It taunts
It flaunts, the shackles it brings
My hands tied
Eyes blind
The mirage walks, in its own stride
I go enraptured
Legs walks their own path
Slowly and steadily
Towards the valley of deep dark oasis
Never to return again..
Never to reborn again...

#review #micropoetry #NCG
*●Salvation In 10●*

Let there be light, out of nothing, the world was formed
Man wanted to stand tall, like Babel, but fell short
Kicked out of Eden, the outer world, a complete hazard
Then Cain sinned because he wasn't able to please God with his sacrifice
Things changed after Abraham and Moses
But it didn't bring enough shine, so the Son came down
So we could live a life ideal, milked with more grace
The car keys given to us to drive our way to eternity
Now that we are saved


●||The Scribe||●
#review
We were chilling in my room yesterday night telling stories about how our moms would punish us when we were little. Jack was quiet the whole time when he suddenly surprised us with his experience.
"Jock, my mom has only caned me three times,"he said. We all looked at him surprised since it was impossible to recall the number of times an African mother caned her child.
"Did grow up paradise before veing dropped on earth?" Sherry asked sarcastically.
"No," he said quietly.
"Then how comes your mom has punished you very few times?" I asked him still surprised.
"Those three times are the only times my mom caned me. The rest of the punishment sessions must have been attempted murders,"he said proudly looking satisfied with his statement. We looked at each other for a few seconds before bursting into laughter. He had made our day.
#review
*Beep*
As soon as he unplugged his phone from the charging port a notification from YouTube arrived. Plugging his earphone to watch the video he thought, ‘This will give the motivation I need to complete my work!’ His phone was still heating but at very less intensity as compared to half an hour before when he was playing games even while charging. He had some pending assignments to complete from which he had taken a break of 10 minutes which eventually lasted more than an hour. Since the deadline of those assignments was very far, he felt free to do it anytime soon but not at that moment. Well he was working on it when his phone gave him a warning about its temperature and so he had to put it down. But he was back at it again, though he was now watching the video, which he thinks was going to motivate him, and not playing games.

*Beep*
Just when the video ends, another notification arrives. It reads ‘It’s time to claim your reward and beat the enemies before they beat you!’ He opened the game as soon as he got the notification and lost in playing it.
Title of the video was: ‘Stop wasting your time and start utilising it!’

#review #everyone #djb #shortstory