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The evening sun went down. Lost in his own world Pablo sat in the back of the veranda, overlooking the beach. The clouds above quickly changed shapes. Racing themselves to create a more meaningful figure. Pablo, wondered if he should paint one of these monsters, as they passed his head, one more abstract than the previous. He looked down at his hands, blood red....


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Written by: #King

The Stolen Key

A passionate bond for eternity,
has reached me.
You paused my breath,
with a kindled spree!

My heart was stolen,
as time passed alone skies.
You rang my inner soul,
and all I ask is be with me!

A new beginning,
rooted from the history.
Your sweet nothings,
Is a pure bliss, Oh wee!

#suan
#poem #romance
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Do tell me again
Those golden words in the end
P. S. I Love You

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I didn't want her to love me,
I wish she could get me
Now and always,
Then and always.




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#heartbreak

Watch his wilted rose
It has faded love petals
And thorns of hatred

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Beat me to pulp
Till I lose consciousness
Burn me in public
Till I be nothing but ash
Drown me in sea
Till I lose my breathe
Choke me as you please
Till all I get is death

No. It is not what you see
it is not about dying.
It is about saving myself
from heartbreaks and crying.
So set me free before
Unbearable turns the pain.
For I have fallen in love with life
Ready to be hurt again.

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Trust is what it lacks (Acrostic)*

Time to play a game. How about some fun?
Related to people, so many yet none
Understand the rule before you play
Search for a hidden message by end of day
True, it may be boring or a tedious task
If you want an answer, it is your soul to ask
So many relationships prove out strong
Why, yet, some do not sustain for long?
How do people manage to stay together?
Against all odds they strive for better
Tougher may be times but they still manage
Infusing a vital thing to stay on same page
Try to find out what we have, what we lack
Love is there, yet this bond develops a crack
Ask for the reason behind stress and strain
‘Cause of which same questions rise again
Keep thinking about the missing thing for cure
Seek the answer within and you shall win for sure.

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Paragraph 2 edited this way, so that's all woman will not be in the doldrums after reading.

Is the one who acted like a mother,
and cook me somethings to be wonder,
why would I be looking her to suffer.
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Mustered courage
Picked up my pen
A hope to rekindle
My romance with words
But words faltered
So did my hope.

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Have I met you before! You who questions my short span of attention, my fading interest, my indifference towards you, but forget to ask yourselves is there by any chance is it me causing you to succumb to this change.
Have I met you before! The fear of banters which runs through my veins, the confusion it creates for the rest of the day. It leaves me with not much options but the lurking aloofness all day.
Yes we have met!

Face is just a mask ,
Real beauty is always seen inside the heart.
-shailja
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Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love or family member
If not include family then I must that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼

#review
Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love our family member
If not include family then I must that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼

War destroyed everything.
But still, there was a tiny bloom from its ruins.

#review

#review
Yes it is right

But the love is a beauty
Love is not just to have only gf or bf
It also about how we love our family member
If not include family then I must say that what about our friends

Friends ,
Firstly they met like a stranger but after some time they were closely to us
The connection between friend (stranger) and us it's nothing but yes it is love

I don't know here I am right or wrong
But after seeing your line I just want to mention it🙏🏼

For understand someone needs feeling
But more a time some are understand but never show
Just have patience
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War destroyed everything.
But still, there was a tiny seedling growing from its ruins.

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Love:
I believe that it is best feelings
When first time I saw a Rose flower
I fall in Love with it
It make me smile
The best feelings from bottom of my heart










But when I closely to that flower
And try to touch ; the Thorne pierced
It's painful
Firstly I don't know it will hurt me too
Gave me pain ; after that feelings
But still I love that flower

Infront of my happiness that pain is nothing
I care for my feelings 🙏🏼

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Devil's call

One one one, Wake-up, it’s a call.
Two two two, end all your bonds.
Three three three, you have just one track.
Four four four, do not look back.
Five five five, it's a momentum towards death.
Six six six, I am a devil in your bed.

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Its her.

The day i know the date i dont.
Finding familiar faces amidst unknown,
That's when something striked me.
Eagerly searching for who it was.
Found a girl who was different from others.
The attitude she carried,
The smile on her face,
Made me do nothing but to gaze,
Her beauty in those sparkling eyes.
Luck brought us to friendship,
And i was on my quest to know her.
But with those years of friendship,
Am still on my ship heading towards her.
The cuteness at words the carefree look,
The maturity that reflects through words.
All keeps me driving on her beautiful path.
Hoping the time keeps it precious,
Don't want the change
As change don't deserve her.

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