*I want to be abandoned when i grow up*
Somedays when I play the mixtapes you made me, it feels like it's listening to me. I sit quiet and tight and meticulously feeling the throbbing in the palm of my left hand, left ribs, left eyes and left side of my bed; as it all that's left now.
Shut up!
I know growing up is tough. But we should've told that it'll remains like afterwards. Someone should've told us how to summon the courage to walk with an unaided wound, for that's all I see everyone doing, and the way two stranger look at each other on sidewalks, I see we're pathetic at doing so.
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Somedays when I play the mixtapes you made me, it feels like it's listening to me. I sit quiet and tight and meticulously feeling the throbbing in the palm of my left hand, left ribs, left eyes and left side of my bed; as it all that's left now.
Shut up!
I know growing up is tough. But we should've told that it'll remains like afterwards. Someone should've told us how to summon the courage to walk with an unaided wound, for that's all I see everyone doing, and the way two stranger look at each other on sidewalks, I see we're pathetic at doing so.
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Give me reason, give me some text,
Why kicked out me in to your life...
If you have reasons so tell me,
If you have any cause so tell me..!!
I'll try to solve it as soon possible,
Please give me some text about it..!!
Why kicked out me in to your life,
Why kicked out me in to the house..!!
I think you have compulsion a lot,
I think you have family pressure a lot..!!
Please tell me one time about it,
I'll talk and explain your parents about it..!!
Give me chance one time,
Give me do one time..!!
I will explain how much i love you,
Front of your parents i will explain some words..!!
-Akash
First time try to write something in English
Please give me suggestions and find mistakes and tell me
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Why kicked out me in to your life...
If you have reasons so tell me,
If you have any cause so tell me..!!
I'll try to solve it as soon possible,
Please give me some text about it..!!
Why kicked out me in to your life,
Why kicked out me in to the house..!!
I think you have compulsion a lot,
I think you have family pressure a lot..!!
Please tell me one time about it,
I'll talk and explain your parents about it..!!
Give me chance one time,
Give me do one time..!!
I will explain how much i love you,
Front of your parents i will explain some words..!!
-Akash
First time try to write something in English
Please give me suggestions and find mistakes and tell me
#Review
People look at the world around them, they see the blessings surrounding others, often a slow disheartening feeling sinks in that there will never be a blessing like that in their lives, they assume their fortune doesn’t have it, they forget and move on.
As time passes, there’s that one blessing that presents itself in their life and stays.
My blessing is you.
#review
#love
As time passes, there’s that one blessing that presents itself in their life and stays.
My blessing is you.
#review
#love
*Annajm Anthem*
We are Annajm
We are the shining star in the sky,
We are a school of excellence,
We are center for education learning.
*We are Annajm*
A school:
With academic excellence,
With a discipline for correction,
With great teachers,
With good enabling environment.
*We are Annajm*
Where students are well learned,
Where students facilitates good habits and values,
Where students are discipline for good moral and learning.
*We are Annajm*
_____________________
*Annajm pledge*
I pledge to Annajm Learners Academy
To obey her rules and guidance,
To respect her teachers like my parents or guidance,
To read my books and do assignments given,
To participate in school activities,
To be of good behavior at school and off school,
To be need at all the time,
To maintain the school status quo.
#review
We are Annajm
We are the shining star in the sky,
We are a school of excellence,
We are center for education learning.
*We are Annajm*
A school:
With academic excellence,
With a discipline for correction,
With great teachers,
With good enabling environment.
*We are Annajm*
Where students are well learned,
Where students facilitates good habits and values,
Where students are discipline for good moral and learning.
*We are Annajm*
_____________________
*Annajm pledge*
I pledge to Annajm Learners Academy
To obey her rules and guidance,
To respect her teachers like my parents or guidance,
To read my books and do assignments given,
To participate in school activities,
To be of good behavior at school and off school,
To be need at all the time,
To maintain the school status quo.
#review
As I gaze into the darkness
Your smile is all I see..
As I lay here in the bitter cold,
Your love encompasses me...
As the silence cuts my soul,
Your singing breaks it's knife...
The gentle touch of your lips and such
Makes everything so right.
To hold you is so precious,
You're like a crystal rose...
So delicate and fragile,
Such beauty to behold!
The crystal rose won't wither...
And never will it die...
As long as you take care of it,
it will always remain in your eye...
My love is much the same...
Eternal and so true...
Your light will never lose my gaze,
'Cause I'm so in love with you!
#love #review
Your smile is all I see..
As I lay here in the bitter cold,
Your love encompasses me...
As the silence cuts my soul,
Your singing breaks it's knife...
The gentle touch of your lips and such
Makes everything so right.
To hold you is so precious,
You're like a crystal rose...
So delicate and fragile,
Such beauty to behold!
The crystal rose won't wither...
And never will it die...
As long as you take care of it,
it will always remain in your eye...
My love is much the same...
Eternal and so true...
Your light will never lose my gaze,
'Cause I'm so in love with you!
#love #review
Rain raining everywhere on the land,
My tears like a big waterfall in body..!!
People are silent because love violent,
It's gave pain them inside slowly..!!
How much time they've can tolerated pain,
Now they're crying loudly in her memories..!!
Now then all are forgotten her memories,
And restarted himself life and lives now batter..!!
- Akash
Give me review guy's and find mistakes more and more so then i can improve it well...😊😊
#Review
My tears like a big waterfall in body..!!
People are silent because love violent,
It's gave pain them inside slowly..!!
How much time they've can tolerated pain,
Now they're crying loudly in her memories..!!
Now then all are forgotten her memories,
And restarted himself life and lives now batter..!!
- Akash
Give me review guy's and find mistakes more and more so then i can improve it well...😊😊
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Hot pants and all are cool,
But I fell in love when I saw you in suit,
I started to feel butterflies in my stomach,
Couldn't believe how can someone be beautiful this much,
My eyes couldn't resist as you passed by,
My world went straight up to the seventh sky,
Time slowed down with your every step,
My heart skipped a beat as you moved ahead,
I quickly went down on my knees to ask you to be mine,
Just then this little dream was broken and I saw that beautiful face as my wife.
#everyone #review #poem
But I fell in love when I saw you in suit,
I started to feel butterflies in my stomach,
Couldn't believe how can someone be beautiful this much,
My eyes couldn't resist as you passed by,
My world went straight up to the seventh sky,
Time slowed down with your every step,
My heart skipped a beat as you moved ahead,
I quickly went down on my knees to ask you to be mine,
Just then this little dream was broken and I saw that beautiful face as my wife.
#everyone #review #poem
What I have became now,
hundreds of unanswered questions,
dozens of undone task,
skipping meals,
and escaping reality by sleeping all day
don't know what is goal for next day,
can't even cry in anxiety,
feeling so small in this vast world
forced to do all these things
will ever I be that me again?
when I was unknown to all these things.
#review #theRRS
Plz correct me if there is any mistake or if it is incomplete
hundreds of unanswered questions,
dozens of undone task,
skipping meals,
and escaping reality by sleeping all day
don't know what is goal for next day,
can't even cry in anxiety,
feeling so small in this vast world
forced to do all these things
will ever I be that me again?
when I was unknown to all these things.
#review #theRRS
Plz correct me if there is any mistake or if it is incomplete
Two soul's sat on a backseat of hatchback;
Poured were the gallons of fuel for the eternal distance to track.
All the day, a bright sunshine
and
a magical mist on windowpanes sometime.
Cupid lent his favorite car so not to leave the soul's unchained;
Stations of spring and summer pass but not an ounce of fuel is drained.
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Poured were the gallons of fuel for the eternal distance to track.
All the day, a bright sunshine
and
a magical mist on windowpanes sometime.
Cupid lent his favorite car so not to leave the soul's unchained;
Stations of spring and summer pass but not an ounce of fuel is drained.
#review
It is hard to meet you everyday ,
Even if we have broken up , and we meet everyday just as friends , it is hard for me to see you just as my friend . We hangout together just as we did it before , we go the same places as we went before , so why does it becomes difficult to let you go in the end . When you say goodbye I think this is the last time we are meeting and we will end up just as other friends end up . I don't know what should I do to have you back in my life , I see you as my everything , I don't want to ruin the beautiful relationship we have now even after we have broken up but try to understand , I love you more than anything and I don't want to die wishing you were mine .
#review
Even if we have broken up , and we meet everyday just as friends , it is hard for me to see you just as my friend . We hangout together just as we did it before , we go the same places as we went before , so why does it becomes difficult to let you go in the end . When you say goodbye I think this is the last time we are meeting and we will end up just as other friends end up . I don't know what should I do to have you back in my life , I see you as my everything , I don't want to ruin the beautiful relationship we have now even after we have broken up but try to understand , I love you more than anything and I don't want to die wishing you were mine .
#review
An angel once caught my attetion,
and then it became a temptation.
The thoughts were just too much,
that they came in a bunch.
The question would be a big attempt,
but it's just a big tempt.
I've just felt something blue,
but it's an open heart just for you...
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and then it became a temptation.
The thoughts were just too much,
that they came in a bunch.
The question would be a big attempt,
but it's just a big tempt.
I've just felt something blue,
but it's an open heart just for you...
#review
The bird yearned for your blood again,
I locked it up behind my rib cage as if is a thirsty Dracula.
And you Thea, the deity of light and I Erebus the deity of shadows can't sway on the same floor again.
I know swaying on old song makes you feel alive, but me swaying again on the same old song would spread black wings out of my back blowing away your smile to the depth of the darkness with no return.
Your blood was and still a garden of freedom to the bird I hold captive, but it's starts withering away.
#everyone #dengbeny #prose #review
I locked it up behind my rib cage as if is a thirsty Dracula.
And you Thea, the deity of light and I Erebus the deity of shadows can't sway on the same floor again.
I know swaying on old song makes you feel alive, but me swaying again on the same old song would spread black wings out of my back blowing away your smile to the depth of the darkness with no return.
Your blood was and still a garden of freedom to the bird I hold captive, but it's starts withering away.
#everyone #dengbeny #prose #review
Waves crash upon the rocks
And I feel the ocean spray.
I see the shore as I sit atop
A boulder in the water's way.
Tides sweep away the sand
And leave the logs and stones.
All together as in a band,
They play their mournful notes.
Light cast from a milky moon,
Accents the waves upon the sea.
Beyond another sandy dune
Is the girl for whom he weeps.
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And I feel the ocean spray.
I see the shore as I sit atop
A boulder in the water's way.
Tides sweep away the sand
And leave the logs and stones.
All together as in a band,
They play their mournful notes.
Light cast from a milky moon,
Accents the waves upon the sea.
Beyond another sandy dune
Is the girl for whom he weeps.
#review
Ok. Literally the first thoughts that came to me. I haven't edited it or shaped it. It's completely raw and rough.
#review #salonikulkarni
[Untitled]
"From the dark emerges light at the break of dawn. And it illuminates the shadows that you're afraid of. Making you see a lot clearer. And you'll see that there are no monsters. Only your imagination."
#review #salonikulkarni
[Untitled]
"From the dark emerges light at the break of dawn. And it illuminates the shadows that you're afraid of. Making you see a lot clearer. And you'll see that there are no monsters. Only your imagination."
An ominous gash of lightning
Ripped through the bosom of the sky,
To disrupt the sombre shroud
And perturb the gentle breeze.
The flurry of air became
An irate gust of wind,
Flaunting its displeasure
At the insolence.
The azure sky turned into
A sullen grey
And the heavens watched the altercation
In dismay.
Miffed, affronted, incensed, seething,
The furious wind released
A thunderous roar
And struck the bellies
Of the pregnant clouds.
Lightning, thunder and stormy skies
Stepped back and watched,
As short-lived pride
And chafed egos were shattered.
Cascades of water poured down
With unbridled might and
Enrobed the blessed earth,
Showering benevolence
on mortal creatures,
With power to delight
And rejuvenate.
Rage and vanity disappeared
As nature’s battles came to naught.
#review
Ripped through the bosom of the sky,
To disrupt the sombre shroud
And perturb the gentle breeze.
The flurry of air became
An irate gust of wind,
Flaunting its displeasure
At the insolence.
The azure sky turned into
A sullen grey
And the heavens watched the altercation
In dismay.
Miffed, affronted, incensed, seething,
The furious wind released
A thunderous roar
And struck the bellies
Of the pregnant clouds.
Lightning, thunder and stormy skies
Stepped back and watched,
As short-lived pride
And chafed egos were shattered.
Cascades of water poured down
With unbridled might and
Enrobed the blessed earth,
Showering benevolence
on mortal creatures,
With power to delight
And rejuvenate.
Rage and vanity disappeared
As nature’s battles came to naught.
#review
Insomnia grabs my hand
After the clock ticks 2,
Tells me stories of ghosts and kings
The tales of angels and jokers
How the hearts are made up of loss,
The roads that lead to hell
Nightmares are the dreams only;
No reality.
I comfort myself in the warm nights
With him by my side
On the concrete roof of my room
I tell him the stories of my eyes
How they glow bright in the mornings
And get dead tired at evenings.
We talk about love, lust, pain and sex;
The way my pen leans its back numb
On the white bed of paper,
The way the moon shows me
All her postures to turn the lights on
The way the whole of me
Falls apart before the kingdom of stars
And the way the winds make love
After the rain is gone
and no lights of the king show up.
And then all of a sudden he vanishes
To the bubbles of cold air
As soon as the dawn steps in
Pressing its feet to the grasses slowly
And all those words fly to the east
And i stand up to apologize to my bed
Everything is left lone again.
-subh
#review
After the clock ticks 2,
Tells me stories of ghosts and kings
The tales of angels and jokers
How the hearts are made up of loss,
The roads that lead to hell
Nightmares are the dreams only;
No reality.
I comfort myself in the warm nights
With him by my side
On the concrete roof of my room
I tell him the stories of my eyes
How they glow bright in the mornings
And get dead tired at evenings.
We talk about love, lust, pain and sex;
The way my pen leans its back numb
On the white bed of paper,
The way the moon shows me
All her postures to turn the lights on
The way the whole of me
Falls apart before the kingdom of stars
And the way the winds make love
After the rain is gone
and no lights of the king show up.
And then all of a sudden he vanishes
To the bubbles of cold air
As soon as the dawn steps in
Pressing its feet to the grasses slowly
And all those words fly to the east
And i stand up to apologize to my bed
Everything is left lone again.
-subh
#review
We go through a phase in life where we dont know what to do , we get frustrated , nothing makes us happy , it gets difficult day by day to live without the person you wished to be with you forever , and then there will be the people with whom you will spend some time laughing and chilling and you will be healed living with them . They will be there whenever you need them , they will never let you feel alone in your problems , they have always got your back . I guess they are whom we call friends .
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I woke up at the stroke of midnight
The old clock was putting up a fight
Centuries old and still going strong
Wish I could say the same for my heart
Few decades old and already tired
I want to keep running
But I can't find my legs
I want to keep swimming
I'm running out of air
Feeling like a butterfly
Caught in the rose thorns
Can't choose my wings or my life
Dying of thirst
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The old clock was putting up a fight
Centuries old and still going strong
Wish I could say the same for my heart
Few decades old and already tired
I want to keep running
But I can't find my legs
I want to keep swimming
I'm running out of air
Feeling like a butterfly
Caught in the rose thorns
Can't choose my wings or my life
Dying of thirst
#review
Like I gaze on all your noble writings,
Meanwhile struggling with my inner fighting,
I adore a few,
Without a single cue,
For strangers thou all art to me,
Yet it's a melody,
Which makes my mind wander,
Yonder,
Where pastures lie,
And cute girls sigh,
Love pangs beckoning all to the wild,
I'm still seeking for someone mild,
To caress my bewildered thoughts,
Carrying me anon to the drowning lots,
Keep loving me though I'm the oddest,
For I love each writing trying to be modest...
#review #everyone #writeutopia
Meanwhile struggling with my inner fighting,
I adore a few,
Without a single cue,
For strangers thou all art to me,
Yet it's a melody,
Which makes my mind wander,
Yonder,
Where pastures lie,
And cute girls sigh,
Love pangs beckoning all to the wild,
I'm still seeking for someone mild,
To caress my bewildered thoughts,
Carrying me anon to the drowning lots,
Keep loving me though I'm the oddest,
For I love each writing trying to be modest...
#review #everyone #writeutopia