Pink.
The sweet perfect childhood.
No concerns and no difficulties, the hardest thing was doing your homework.
Your biggest demands was to stay up past 9 P.M.
Grey.
Life started spinning its wheels, many disappointments and fears represented by both, strangers and people you respected and admired.
But you still clung to hope, thinking they might come back one day despite the hurt they caused.
Red.
Someone came in, took no permission and just broke in.
They made life seem easy and warm when you're with them, hard and lonely without them.
They filled you with passion and love, you couldn't remember how it was before anymore.
Black.
That very someone broke your heart from the inside out, gave you a blow that sent you flying for eternity.
Now... You spend the time re-learning old lessons and life teaches you new ones.
You're not just hurt, you're devastated, demolished maybe obliterated, desecrated or demoralized and annihilated even.
Pain seems more like a mocking word to you, it's agony and sorrow that are a little closer to tell your story.
You don't trust anyone, not even yourself, you try to end it all but you fail.So you just lay there in numbness waiting for the next color to appear.
If there's any next, that is.
#Draft
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The sweet perfect childhood.
No concerns and no difficulties, the hardest thing was doing your homework.
Your biggest demands was to stay up past 9 P.M.
Grey.
Life started spinning its wheels, many disappointments and fears represented by both, strangers and people you respected and admired.
But you still clung to hope, thinking they might come back one day despite the hurt they caused.
Red.
Someone came in, took no permission and just broke in.
They made life seem easy and warm when you're with them, hard and lonely without them.
They filled you with passion and love, you couldn't remember how it was before anymore.
Black.
That very someone broke your heart from the inside out, gave you a blow that sent you flying for eternity.
Now... You spend the time re-learning old lessons and life teaches you new ones.
You're not just hurt, you're devastated, demolished maybe obliterated, desecrated or demoralized and annihilated even.
Pain seems more like a mocking word to you, it's agony and sorrow that are a little closer to tell your story.
You don't trust anyone, not even yourself, you try to end it all but you fail.So you just lay there in numbness waiting for the next color to appear.
If there's any next, that is.
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Take a look at my countenance, you'd see—
Lines that paint experiences:
Pain and gain;
Sour love,
And
Pure love.
Look at my eyes,
Frozen past ice,
Imagine the lies
They've witnessed.
Look at my lips;
The lines that tell a thousand tales.
Pay attention to 'em, they now speak louder than my dead voice.
Touch my ears, do they breath...no, sound?
Pay attention, you'd hear sounds from my past recurring from 'em.
My entirety, now,
Is full of lines bearing experiences.
Some I wish could replay before my sunken eyes.
Others I wish could escape the cutis of my senses.
©abu_muhsiin
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Lines that paint experiences:
Pain and gain;
Sour love,
And
Pure love.
Look at my eyes,
Frozen past ice,
Imagine the lies
They've witnessed.
Look at my lips;
The lines that tell a thousand tales.
Pay attention to 'em, they now speak louder than my dead voice.
Touch my ears, do they breath...no, sound?
Pay attention, you'd hear sounds from my past recurring from 'em.
My entirety, now,
Is full of lines bearing experiences.
Some I wish could replay before my sunken eyes.
Others I wish could escape the cutis of my senses.
©abu_muhsiin
#poem #review
“Oooh, Yeah, Sing it then.”
He said while handing me a cup of tea. Saad used to take tea a lot back in the days. Tea was his only obsession those days.
“I can’t sing”, I replied. He looked at me and smiled and suddenly he started laughing at me.
“Okay, who are you fooling?” He asked.
“I’m not fooling, I’m just telling you that I can’t sing.”
“Oh?” He looked me up and down.
I said, “Yeah”. “I don’t believe this”, he replied.
“Why not?”
“Do you even remember I’m your brother?”
“Of course I do!!”
“Great!”
We used to argue a lot. And every time we argued, one of us was definitely going to be mad at another. This was how we showed affection, love and care for each other. And the most funny thing about us having arguments and being mad at each other was that none of this lasted for more than a day. It would just take a smile to make everything go away.
Every night we would go out on the Bahawalpur road near Chaubarji and we would take tea and talk or usually sing. So that night he was singing our favorite song “Sau Baras guzre saans lye, Sau baras guzre din dhalay.” It was something like this. I know weird taste in music but.. we liked it.
I had a rough day and I couldn’t do anything to get along. It’s not that I wasn’t trying but that day wasn’t like usual.
“Look I know I’m ruining a good mood and time but I’m sorry. Today wasn’t kind to me. I lost a friend and I don’t wanna talk about it.” I said.
“I’m sorry.” He exhaled.
“I don’t wanna lose another.” I looked at him and said this and I couldn’t stop me from smiling and when I smiled, like I said, it all went away, just like that.
And then we both started smiling and I could hear whisper of his smile, his mouth was almost in the mug so there was a sound. And then we both started laughing.
Then he looked at me with pride in his eyes and replied, “you won’t ever lose me, no matter what!”
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He said while handing me a cup of tea. Saad used to take tea a lot back in the days. Tea was his only obsession those days.
“I can’t sing”, I replied. He looked at me and smiled and suddenly he started laughing at me.
“Okay, who are you fooling?” He asked.
“I’m not fooling, I’m just telling you that I can’t sing.”
“Oh?” He looked me up and down.
I said, “Yeah”. “I don’t believe this”, he replied.
“Why not?”
“Do you even remember I’m your brother?”
“Of course I do!!”
“Great!”
We used to argue a lot. And every time we argued, one of us was definitely going to be mad at another. This was how we showed affection, love and care for each other. And the most funny thing about us having arguments and being mad at each other was that none of this lasted for more than a day. It would just take a smile to make everything go away.
Every night we would go out on the Bahawalpur road near Chaubarji and we would take tea and talk or usually sing. So that night he was singing our favorite song “Sau Baras guzre saans lye, Sau baras guzre din dhalay.” It was something like this. I know weird taste in music but.. we liked it.
I had a rough day and I couldn’t do anything to get along. It’s not that I wasn’t trying but that day wasn’t like usual.
“Look I know I’m ruining a good mood and time but I’m sorry. Today wasn’t kind to me. I lost a friend and I don’t wanna talk about it.” I said.
“I’m sorry.” He exhaled.
“I don’t wanna lose another.” I looked at him and said this and I couldn’t stop me from smiling and when I smiled, like I said, it all went away, just like that.
And then we both started smiling and I could hear whisper of his smile, his mouth was almost in the mug so there was a sound. And then we both started laughing.
Then he looked at me with pride in his eyes and replied, “you won’t ever lose me, no matter what!”
#shortstory #writeup #review #Massab
Don't get upset if you ever feel left alone by your friends , if you feel alone when you are with them they are not your friends . Its just that they don't deserve you . Ask yourself , Do you ever feel alone when you are with your family ? True friends are also like your family . It is good to live alone rather than living with the people who do not respect your presence . Never adjust with this shit , life has planned somthing good for you .
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How far
how far would you go
to tame your fears,
how far would you go
to hold your tears,
how far would you go
to win the fight,
how far would you go
to survive the night,
how far would you go
to kill your dreams,
how far would you go
to muffle your screams,
how far would you go
to challenge fate,
how far would you go
to love someone you hate.
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how far would you go
to tame your fears,
how far would you go
to hold your tears,
how far would you go
to win the fight,
how far would you go
to survive the night,
how far would you go
to kill your dreams,
how far would you go
to muffle your screams,
how far would you go
to challenge fate,
how far would you go
to love someone you hate.
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How foolish.
You don't hold broken shards or you'll get cut, don't turn on the light.
You don't approach an injured tiger just because you found it, all you'll get is a bite.
Leave me to dance to the fire of my sorrows, let me burn bright.
Leave me to swing to the ropes of my pain, let me enjoy how it is tight.
Leave me to paint my bloody words on the walls of life, let me quiver in fright.
Leave me to swallow the glasses of shame, let me cry the night.
Because true colours don't have a name right.
Let me battle my war, and go to your own fight.
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You don't hold broken shards or you'll get cut, don't turn on the light.
You don't approach an injured tiger just because you found it, all you'll get is a bite.
Leave me to dance to the fire of my sorrows, let me burn bright.
Leave me to swing to the ropes of my pain, let me enjoy how it is tight.
Leave me to paint my bloody words on the walls of life, let me quiver in fright.
Leave me to swallow the glasses of shame, let me cry the night.
Because true colours don't have a name right.
Let me battle my war, and go to your own fight.
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Heal
The music should
hit
where it hurts,
The waves should
soothe
where it aches,
The air should
touch
where it burns,
The rain should
kiss
where it pains.
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The music should
hit
where it hurts,
The waves should
soothe
where it aches,
The air should
touch
where it burns,
The rain should
kiss
where it pains.
#review #everyone #sh #micropoetry
People look at the world around them, they see the blessings surrounding others, often a slow disheartening feeling sinks in that there will never be a blessing like that in their lives, they assume their fortune doesn’t have it, they forget and move on.
As time passes, there’s that one blessing that presents itself in their life and stays.
My blessing is you.
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As time passes, there’s that one blessing that presents itself in their life and stays.
My blessing is you.
#review
*I want to be abandoned when i grow up*
Somedays when I play the mixtapes you made me, it feels like it's listening to me. I sit quiet and tight and meticulously feeling the throbbing in the palm of my left hand, left ribs, left eyes and left side of my bed; as it all that's left now.
Shut up!
I know growing up is tough. But we should've told that it'll remains like afterwards. Someone should've told us how to summon the courage to walk with an unaided wound, for that's all I see everyone doing, and the way two stranger look at each other on sidewalks, I see we're pathetic at doing so.
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Somedays when I play the mixtapes you made me, it feels like it's listening to me. I sit quiet and tight and meticulously feeling the throbbing in the palm of my left hand, left ribs, left eyes and left side of my bed; as it all that's left now.
Shut up!
I know growing up is tough. But we should've told that it'll remains like afterwards. Someone should've told us how to summon the courage to walk with an unaided wound, for that's all I see everyone doing, and the way two stranger look at each other on sidewalks, I see we're pathetic at doing so.
#Review
Give me reason, give me some text,
Why kicked out me in to your life...
If you have reasons so tell me,
If you have any cause so tell me..!!
I'll try to solve it as soon possible,
Please give me some text about it..!!
Why kicked out me in to your life,
Why kicked out me in to the house..!!
I think you have compulsion a lot,
I think you have family pressure a lot..!!
Please tell me one time about it,
I'll talk and explain your parents about it..!!
Give me chance one time,
Give me do one time..!!
I will explain how much i love you,
Front of your parents i will explain some words..!!
-Akash
First time try to write something in English
Please give me suggestions and find mistakes and tell me
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Why kicked out me in to your life...
If you have reasons so tell me,
If you have any cause so tell me..!!
I'll try to solve it as soon possible,
Please give me some text about it..!!
Why kicked out me in to your life,
Why kicked out me in to the house..!!
I think you have compulsion a lot,
I think you have family pressure a lot..!!
Please tell me one time about it,
I'll talk and explain your parents about it..!!
Give me chance one time,
Give me do one time..!!
I will explain how much i love you,
Front of your parents i will explain some words..!!
-Akash
First time try to write something in English
Please give me suggestions and find mistakes and tell me
#Review
People look at the world around them, they see the blessings surrounding others, often a slow disheartening feeling sinks in that there will never be a blessing like that in their lives, they assume their fortune doesn’t have it, they forget and move on.
As time passes, there’s that one blessing that presents itself in their life and stays.
My blessing is you.
#review
#love
As time passes, there’s that one blessing that presents itself in their life and stays.
My blessing is you.
#review
#love
*Annajm Anthem*
We are Annajm
We are the shining star in the sky,
We are a school of excellence,
We are center for education learning.
*We are Annajm*
A school:
With academic excellence,
With a discipline for correction,
With great teachers,
With good enabling environment.
*We are Annajm*
Where students are well learned,
Where students facilitates good habits and values,
Where students are discipline for good moral and learning.
*We are Annajm*
_____________________
*Annajm pledge*
I pledge to Annajm Learners Academy
To obey her rules and guidance,
To respect her teachers like my parents or guidance,
To read my books and do assignments given,
To participate in school activities,
To be of good behavior at school and off school,
To be need at all the time,
To maintain the school status quo.
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We are Annajm
We are the shining star in the sky,
We are a school of excellence,
We are center for education learning.
*We are Annajm*
A school:
With academic excellence,
With a discipline for correction,
With great teachers,
With good enabling environment.
*We are Annajm*
Where students are well learned,
Where students facilitates good habits and values,
Where students are discipline for good moral and learning.
*We are Annajm*
_____________________
*Annajm pledge*
I pledge to Annajm Learners Academy
To obey her rules and guidance,
To respect her teachers like my parents or guidance,
To read my books and do assignments given,
To participate in school activities,
To be of good behavior at school and off school,
To be need at all the time,
To maintain the school status quo.
#review
As I gaze into the darkness
Your smile is all I see..
As I lay here in the bitter cold,
Your love encompasses me...
As the silence cuts my soul,
Your singing breaks it's knife...
The gentle touch of your lips and such
Makes everything so right.
To hold you is so precious,
You're like a crystal rose...
So delicate and fragile,
Such beauty to behold!
The crystal rose won't wither...
And never will it die...
As long as you take care of it,
it will always remain in your eye...
My love is much the same...
Eternal and so true...
Your light will never lose my gaze,
'Cause I'm so in love with you!
#love #review
Your smile is all I see..
As I lay here in the bitter cold,
Your love encompasses me...
As the silence cuts my soul,
Your singing breaks it's knife...
The gentle touch of your lips and such
Makes everything so right.
To hold you is so precious,
You're like a crystal rose...
So delicate and fragile,
Such beauty to behold!
The crystal rose won't wither...
And never will it die...
As long as you take care of it,
it will always remain in your eye...
My love is much the same...
Eternal and so true...
Your light will never lose my gaze,
'Cause I'm so in love with you!
#love #review
Rain raining everywhere on the land,
My tears like a big waterfall in body..!!
People are silent because love violent,
It's gave pain them inside slowly..!!
How much time they've can tolerated pain,
Now they're crying loudly in her memories..!!
Now then all are forgotten her memories,
And restarted himself life and lives now batter..!!
- Akash
Give me review guy's and find mistakes more and more so then i can improve it well...😊😊
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My tears like a big waterfall in body..!!
People are silent because love violent,
It's gave pain them inside slowly..!!
How much time they've can tolerated pain,
Now they're crying loudly in her memories..!!
Now then all are forgotten her memories,
And restarted himself life and lives now batter..!!
- Akash
Give me review guy's and find mistakes more and more so then i can improve it well...😊😊
#Review