You can start sending task 2 questions again, I'll write one tomorrow for the #2amessays series)

Come on be more creative, I need something to pick from

The random number generator picked 3, but I'll for sure consider other questions as well for the upcoming "episode"s.

P.S: Shaxzod bilan dogovor qimaganmiz faqat san bergan questionga yozaman deb, random generator bergan sonni oldim.

I'm about to finish writing, I tried to make it a bit different and slightly shorter than my previous essays, here's the planning:

Introduction:
- Position: Agree, old people should keep working
- Benefits to society, economy, health, and expertise

Body 1:
- Benefits to economy and society
- Experience, skills, knowledge
- Better decision-making, diverse workforce

Body 2:
- Benefits to health and well-being
- Physical and mental activity
- Cognitive decline prevention, social connections

Conclusion:
- restate position and benefits
- win win for all
- some encouragement to keep them working

One more important thing here. I completely disagree with the given statement since the elderly have already done their job and now it's our time to replace them and put food on the table. But. I can't write solely about this idea and make it up to 250 words, so I have to say I agree.

You see, you don't have to state your own opinion based off of your life and experience, the examiners ain't gonna knock your door at 2 a.m. and attack you if don't follow what you wrote about, so write what's more convenient to write.

No matter how hard I tried to keep it down to 300 words, the essay still eventually came out in 316 words. Not good.

The full assessment scales used by IELTS Writing examiners, are NOW available. These consist of the IELTS band descriptors and the detailed, key assessment criteria which support the band descriptors.

#WritingQuestions

May 6 (Uzb)

Task 1 (double charts)

The line graph showing the contribution of five industries to the economy of a country between 2005-2009

The pie chart showing the total employment rate in 2009

Task 2
Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that children should NOT go to school until they are older.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You can send some more task 2 questions, I'll make a list and pick one randomly.

#2amessays

Got it, I'll post 2 essays this time 😁

Read EACH LINE carefully!

#WritingMarathon registration will open TODAY! Since each participant will receive feedback as well as approximate score for their work, seats are limited!

So postpone your registration AT YOUR OWN RISK ⚠️

Here are they key details you need to know:

1. There will be TEN complete sets of questions (x10 Task 1s & 10xTask 2s) shared daily.

2. The pattern of schedule:

Day 1 - Task 1 (the task will be set at midnight and you will have 24 hours to submit your work)

Day 2 - Task 2 (the task will be set at midnight and you will have 24 hours to submit your work)

Day 3 - Revision (model answers & video explanation)

Day 4 - Day OFF (usually Saturdays because I will be busy with my CELTA course)

p.S. You will ONLY receive FEEDBACK if you submit your work within 24-hr deadline. If you miss this deadline, you should still complete your work to proceed with the marathon, but you won’t get any feedback for late submissions.

3. You won’t be given a new task UNLESS you submit your task #discipline

4. All the tasks will be shared on Google Drive (so you will need a gmail account) plus you submit your work there (we will use telegram only for communication purporses)

5. PRICE: UZS 750,000

Price BREAKDOWN:

a) Models & Explanation UZS 250,000 (25k for each set)

b) Feedback UZS 500,000 (50k for each set)

a + b = 750,000

SET means both task 1 and task 2 and there are ten sets of authentic full writing tests.

BUT you can pay a DISCOUNTED price of only UZS 550,000 if you join by MAY 10 (#PrettySweetBargain)

If you register between May 11-May 13, you will HAVE TO pay the full price. The registration will close strictly at 00:00 on May 14!

The MARATHON starts on MAY 14 (we need those extra FOUR days to set up your portfolios on Google Drive)

I strongly recommend joining this marathon, it will definitely be helpful for everyone!

I'm not saying you'll be able to get 7.5-8.0 from writing immediately after completing the marathon, but you'll gain the core knowledge and find out what you should focus on.

The links:

1. https://wordcounter.net/
2. https://writeandimprove.com/
3. https://ludwig.guru/
4. http://www.just-the-word.com/

Share the video and the channel with your friends!

This is what made me interested in learning German.

I never did tho.

There's two more to add here, as of now:

5. https://quillbot.com/grammar-check
6. https://chat.openai.com/

ChatGPT isn't available in Uzbekistan, so there a couple workarounds - you either find a foreign number, "borrow" it, or use the @aigpt4bot .

Back before the first uzbek niners came out, I remember emailing Chris Pell from IELTS Advantage on individual 1 on 1 sessions to get a band 9.0.

I wanted a niner to teach me how to get a 9.0, but unfortunately a girl from support department replied and told me that they do not offer personalized lessons and live sessions, then she went on advertising the VIP course.

When niners came out, I was at the same time genuinely happy and frustrated.

Happy because these guys broke the glass ceiling preventing uzbeks from getting 9.0.

Sad because that could be me.

I know I might've been too optimistic with that wish to outstrip the guys who've been in this field more than I've been in this world, but anyway, although very little, there still was a chance.