IELTS BRO| EVEREST
2.02K subscribers
180 photos
95 videos
22 files
63 links
IELTS 8.5| Writing 8.0 (both IDP & BC)| Speaking 9.0
Download Telegram
Some people think that living on earth will become difficult in the future. Therefore, more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, like Mars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Nowadays, the whole world is witnessing various issues such as the depletion of natural resources, global warming, and the scarcity of potable water. It is widely believed that spending more money on exploring habitable planets for a possible rescue is a good solution. However, I am convinced that people should direct their resources toward addressing global issues rather than investing in space exploration.

There are a number of reasons why I think it is better to focus on the problems on Earth. Firstly, spending more money on current global issues would solve the majority of them. For example, running out of fossil fuels is a major concern for people’s future lives because they rely on the natural resources for heat, transportation fuels, and many other aspects of life. However, it is still possible to cease the depletion of natural resources by investing more in creating more green technologies such as solar panels, wind turbines, and electric cars. Increased pollution is another potential threat to our future well-being.Likewise, a higher amount of money could be spent on improving recycling systems, which may reduce waste production significantly. Therefore, these investments in solving the problems of the planet seem to render investing in exploring other planets unnecessary.

It is true that abandoning all of the existing issues and leaving for another planet like Mars would be easier than solving them. Several renowned scientists and companies, including Elon Musk and Nasa, have already come up with some models of habitable Moon bases and Mars colonization projects, claiming that these can be feasible with the help of modern technology. Having said that, this solution is still risky. In other words, even minor miscalculations could cause the extinction of the whole human race. Living on other planets has not been tested yet, which makes the solution rather unreliable. Another factor to consider is people’s consent to leave the earth. It will certainly be hard to convince everyone to live on other planets. This is because some people are not advised to travel to other countries by plane due to health issues like high blood pressure, let alone fly into space. Thus, saving our own planet is a better option.

In conclusion, although modern technology can enable people to move to other planets, inhabiting other planets is impractical and risky for people’s health and lives in general. It is better to spend more money on finding solutions to the issues on Earth.


By @IELTS_bro
Global warming is creating many problems for the environment and humans.
What problems does global warming cause?
How can we solve the problems?


Global warming is blamed for a number of problems on Earth. This essay will discuss the impact of global warming on the environment and humans and suggest solutions to alleviate the issue.

Global warming does create a number of problems for the flora and fauna. Firstly, increasing temperatures lead to forest fires. As a consequence, different animal species lose their habitats or even die out. This problem creates droughts as well, which makes it hard for plants and trees to blossom. This is because they rely on water to grow, yet global warming is making the water inaccessible. Moreover, global warming causes ice to melt. Annual sea levels have already brought floods to coastal countries such as Indonesia, which clearly shows the impact of climate change on humans.

It is important to take action against global warming to prevent the problems stated above. To do this, people should eliminate, or at least reduce, the contributing factors of climate change. The first solution is to use alternative energy sources. For example, using wind or solar energy instead of fossil fuels would reduce carbon emissions significantly because sustainable energy sources hardly ever release CO2 into the atmosphere and contribute to global warming. Secondly, the government should regulate industries that cut down forests. For any cut tree, it is vital to require the forestry industry to plant more trees. In this way, it will be possible to save trees that cause precipitation and provide more shade.

In conclusion, global warming depletes the flora and fauna and causes ice melting and floods. In order to solve the problem, the government should encourage citizens and businesses to use alternative energy and plant more trees
.

277 words. ±30minutes

By @IELTS_bro
IELTS BRO| EVEREST
#goodnews
I think most of you have already known the news. I have prepared some posts on it. So let's go! Let me show you THE BIG ENDING POINT OF 2022!

You ready?)

@IELTS_bro
Overall 8.5
This media is not supported in your browser
VIEW IN TELEGRAM
First of all, I wanna say Alhamdulillah. God gives me everything.

©Khabib Nurmagamedov
I am now wholeheartedly grateful. Thanks everybody for your attention. I hope I will keep living up to your expectations and wishes.

I think I must mention people who helped me to get this score.

The first person to mention has to be my teacher, Khurshid aka Urokov. I am an Everester too. And when I first stepped into this house, my English was at around am-is-are level. His lessons, life tips and inspiring personality helped me to grow mentally strong and hard-working. Thank you, Khurshid aka.

Secondly, my colleague and close friend, Oysara Ravshanova did most of the job to lift my speaking upto band 8.5. Thank you for helping me improve my speech, Oysara)

Thirdly, I learnt a lot about speaking (in terms of accent and arguments) from my bro Isroil Buriev. Although we haven't had a chance to meet up and practise in person, his channel and its amazingly useful content helped me boost my speaking.

It is impossible to overlook the contribution of my bro, mr. KHURSHIDBEK KERIMOV. Thanks for coaching, brother.

Those whose names weren't mentioned, it's not that I don't value your contributions. I just can't name all of your names because the names are too many))) I learned many things from you all.

Sincerely, @IELTS_bro
I Wanna Thank Me - SNOOP DOGG | Motivation Video | WhatsApp Status
<unknown>
And I'd like to finish this post with Snoop Dog's words😉😉

@IELTS_bro
Now I can be sure that the essays and the sample speaking answers I post are 7.5+ and 8.5 respectively.

Have a look through the channel for samples👆👆👆

@IELTS_bro
Task 2:

Today parents spend little free time with their children.

Why is it the case?
Who are more affected: parents or children?


Try to write ONLY introduction in the comments👇👇👇
In many parts of the world, parents tend to spend little time with their children because of different reasons like breadwinning. However, most contemporary parents are said to be spending even little of their free time with them. In this essay, I will come up with some reasons why this issue exists and explain why I believe children are affected more than their parents.


Here is my version. Compare it with yours.

By the way, this is the topic of Dec 17 exam (my writing score for this topic turned out 8.0)
It is thought that governments should invest more money in building highrise buildings to attract more tourists.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#Dubai#travel#tasktwo#ielts#essay
Large cities have always been thought to offer a decent quality of life. However, it is presently claimed that life in some large municipalities is getting worse. This essay explains why this issue exists in big cities and how to improve life standards there.




There are a number of reasons why it is becoming harder to live in some large cities. The first culprit is overpopulation. Some cities are unable to house all of their residents because the population outnumbers available housing. For example, most large cities, such as Delhi, have high rates of homelessness. This, in turn, makes people living in such areas dissatisfied with the life of that city. Secondly, the careless attitude of people towards the local environment also contributes to the decline in the quality of life in big cities. In other words, most contemporary individuals consider that governments and local services are supposed to deal with the problems seen in their city. Meanwhile, the government cannot always instantly solve them on a large scale. Therefore, most large cities seem to be filled with unresolved issues.




As the problems appear due to the reasons stated above, it is important to base the solutions on them. The first sensible solution is to make the city's outskirts appealing places to live and work. If people living outside the large cities have decent facilities in their own local area, they will certainly live and work there. This will reduce the number of people, and improve life satisfaction in municipalities as a result. Moreover, schools, universities and companies should organize volunteer events to solve problems in their communities on a more frequent basis. These events would teach people to be more solicitous about local life, and help governments solve issues more instantly.




In conclusion, large cities are becoming worse because of overpopulation and people’s carelessness towards local problems. Those cities will certainly have a better quality of life if governments discourage people from moving to large cities by improving standards in the countryside and if organizations hold more volunteer events to help the officials solve problems.

By @IELTS_bro
Just a reminder😉😄
The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts compare the proportions of degrees granted in four different majors at the National University throughout 20 years, with a close look at the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.
 
Overall, it is clear from the pie charts that the shares of computer science students who were awarded grants increased over the given years, while the percentage of students in the business field showed the reverse. The other two fields had identical percentages in the first and final years, although the indices varied in 2000. It is also worth noting that the figure for computer science remained the highest in all of the three years under focus.
 
In 1990, the shares of fields named Computer Science and Business were the same: 30%. The former increased by 10% a decade later and ended up with almost half in 2010. However, there was a dramatic fall in the business field from 30% to 20% and to 15% in the final year.
 
The percentages of medicine and law were 25% and 15%, respectively, in 1990 and 2010. Nevertheless, in 2000, their indices were 20% apart, the former having 30% and the latter 10%.

191 words, written by @IELTS_bro
Endi esa eng uzoq kutilgan yangilikka keldik, azizlar!⛰️🚀

OVERALL: 8.5

"Uzoq kutilgan" deganda shaxsan o'zimni nazarda tutmoqdaman, do'stlar! Sababi, kamina bu natijani chamasi ikki yil kuttim! Mana shu kunga nasib qilgan ekan, endi ko'ngil joyiga tushdi, Xudo hohlasa!

Xumoy aslida ancha oldin EVERESTER bo'lgan! Adashmasam 5 yilcha oldin grammatika guruhimlarimdan birida o'qishni boshlagan edi! Mazmunli savollari, darsga munosabati va eng muhimi guruhdoshlariga yordam qo'lini cho'zishga doim tayyorligi bilan srazu mehrimni qozongan edi o'shanda!

Keyin esa IELTS o'qidi, overall 7.0 natija qayd etti va jamoa a'zosiga aylandi! Bir oz vaqt o'tgach natijasini overall 7.5 va 8.0ga ko'tarib oldi!

Ustoz sifatida ham katta yutuqlarga erishdi! Overall 7.0, 7.5 va CEFR C1 holder o'nlab shogirdlar chiqardi! Yuzlab shogirdlari mehrini qozondi va EVEREST yetakchi ustozlaridan biriga aylandi!

Overall 8.5ga yo'l esa oson bo'lmadi! Ko'pchilikni xabari bo'lmasa kerak lekin Xumoy chamasi yetti marta urinish qildi bu natijaga erishish uchun! Faqat overall 8.0 chiqaverdi! Mana, sabr va matonat o'z so'zini aytti baribir!

Baraka top, Xumoy, ukajonim! Menga o'z ukamdaysan! Sen bilan fahrlanaman!

📨 Personal messages: @KhumoyunIELTSbro
⛰️Channel: @IELTS_bro

P.S. Endi 9.0 natijangni kutaman! Bungayam oz qoldi, nasib! :)

Instagram | Telegram | YouTube
⛰️ Manzils
OVERALL 8.5 AGAIN!!! 🏔🚀

EVEREST is once again making the history, my friends ;)!

KHUMOYUNMIRZO KHOLMAKHAMATOV (@KhumoyunIELTSbro) natijasi EVERESTER kandidatlar qayd etgan O'N IKKINCHI overall 8.5 natija bo'ladi, azizlar! Ishoning, bu borada hali EVERESTga tenglashgan o'quv markazi Respublikada yo'q, qanaqa reklamalarga hozirgacha ko'zingiz tushgan bo'lsa ham!

🏔LISTENING - 8.5 (fantastic)
🏔READING - 8.5 (phenomenal)
🏔WRITING - 7.5 (outstanding)🔥
🏔SPEAKING - 8.5 (incredible)🔥

Mr. Khumoyunmirzo Kholmakhamatov EVEREST INTEGRO manzilimizda faoliyat yuritadilar! Mr. Kholmakhamatov EVEREST bitiruvchisi bo'lib, birinchi urinishda overall 7.0 qayd etib jamoadoshimizga aylangan edi! Ustozlik tajribasi va bir oz tayyorgarlik natijani oldin 7.5, songra 8.0 va nihoyat overall 8.5gacha ko'tarilishiga sabab bo'libdi!

⛰️ CHANNEL: @IELTS_bro

Ushbu xayrli natijani MAXIMUM REPOST qilaylik, azizlar! Iloji boricha ko'pchilikka motivatsiya bo'lib xizmat qilsin! ⛰️🚀

P.S. Barchangizga shu kabi yuksak natijalar nasib qilsin, qadrli EVERESTERLAR! 🤲

Telegram | YouTube | Instagram
⛰️ Manzils :)