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Hi thereπŸ‘‹. I'm AbdulAziz, the owner of this channel and an English teacher with more than 8 years of teaching experience.
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My latest IELTS result (August, 2023):

Listening 9.0
Reading 8.5
Writing 7.0
Speaking 7.5
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Essay checking is one of the most time-consuming and challenging parts of teaching writing ✍️ 😁

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Sample answer for the question above:


The table compares underground railway systems of six cities of the world in terms of the opening years, route and the number of passengers.

Overall, what stands out from the table is that the oldest railway system is the one in London and it had the most extensive route. However, the greatest number of passengers among the 6 railway systems belonged to Tokyo's.


Turning to the details, the underground railway systems of London, Paris and Tokyo were not only the oldest but also had higher numbers of passengers and longer distance covered. To be more specific, London, opened first in 1863, had the longest route of 394 km and serves 775 passengers annually. Similarly,, as the second oldest metro system opened in 1900, Paris railway system stretches almost 200km and was used by 1191 passengers every year. Meanwhile, Tokyo was opened in 1927 and had a bit shorter route of 155 km but served almost 2000 passengers on a yearly basis representing the largest number among all the railway systems listed.


On the other hand, the other three cities' rail systems received much lower numbers of passengers and had shorter distance covered. Kyoto and LA railway systems, which were opened in the most recent time, had similar number of passengers, 45 and 50, correspondingly. Lastly, Washington DC had about 144 passengers and the route
extended 126 km.
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Make sure you understand the graph as well as possible
πŸ“ Here goes Writing Task 1 sample! πŸ“Š

Afraid of getting tables on Task 1? Don't worry, we've got you covered! Here is a sample we found for you, and remember, it's all about practice.

Read carefully and let us know how you would score it in the comments below.

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