Голос автора: тише воды, ниже травы

Дмитрий Щербинин, кандидат физико-математических наук, старший научный сотрудник лаборатории нелинейной оптики конденсированных сред МНОЦ Физики Наноструктур, и Юлия Рябухина, доцент, кандидат филологических наук, обсудят, как изменилось отношение к голосу автора в современном научном тексте

В последнее десятилетие в повествование в научном письме перестает быть обезличенным, и присутствие автора в тексте все более заметно - автор активен. Вспомните, еще совсем недавно все гайдлайны говорили, что надо избегать личных местоимений, что надо использовать фразы в духе "было показано, что…”, "В работе исследуется...", "Впервые демонстрируется.... ". Сейчас же в рекомендациях для авторов мы видим, что следует избегать чрезмерного использования страдательного залога, громоздких сложных предложений, и обезличенных конструкций. Начался период когда автор получил право на голос. Но это только первые шаги. А может ли автор привносить в научный текст цитаты из популярной культуры, строить аллегорические образы для лучшего понимания работы, напрямую писать, что нечто произошло волею случая, а что-то так до сих пор и осталось за гранью его понимания, или даже шутить в тексте научной статьи? Не приводит ли это к размыванию научного результата?

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Dash (—)/(–) separates or connects words or groups of words to introduce a clarification or a range.

Further effects must contribute to the dominant nature of this mutation — only one of the two copies of the gene needs to be mutated to cause the disease.

Dipole disorder has been reported to enhance the piezoelectric effect — the conversion of strain to electrical charge — in a nonlinear dielectric.

Where will you use the dash and where will you use the hyphen?

Lithium … ion batteries, for example, can store a lot of energy, but their energy-delivery speeds … their power densities … are limited by the slow kinetics of the electrochemical processes that control discharge in these devices.

Lithium-ion batteries, for example, can store a lot of energy, but their energy-delivery speeds — their power densities — are limited by the slow kinetics of the electrochemical processes that control discharge in these devices.

Roman Zakoldaev invites you to talk about possible ways for a researcher to communicate in the global scientific community. You will discuss:

▪ what impact on a scientist's career publications have
▪ what formats of publications are effective
▪ how to make your synopsis work for you
▪ how to balance your research and other activities

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Em Dashes (—), En Dashes (–)
Why are they em dashes and en dashes?

The em dash is about the same width as the letter M, and the en dash is just about the same width as the letter N.

En Dashes (–) are mainly used between numbers, dates, or other notations to signify “(up) to and including.” When an en dash is inserted, it does not have spaces on either side.

✔️World War II (1939–1945) significantly changed the balance of power worldwide.
✔️The university main hall will be closed August 1–August 31.
✔️The review spans pages 128–34.


Em Dashes (—) are used to emphasize additional information that elaborates on some details and are spaced on both sides.

✔️Gu and colleagues hypothesised that the characteristic oscillation period is proportional to the size of the system — the space to which people are confined — and that there are no intrinsic reasons why the oscillations should spin one way or another.

✔️The authors disrupted the antiparallel dipole arrangement of lead zirconate by introducing regions of non-polar dielectrics — materials that host dipoles much smaller than those of antiferroelectrics, but only under an applied electric field.

✔️Techniques such as atomic layer deposition — in which atomically thin sheets of a material form from reactions of gaseous precursors at the surface of a substrate — have enabled antiferroelectric capacitors to be prepared across silicon wafers at low temperatures compatible with processes used to make modern microelectronics.

Strong Verbs

Verbs denote actions, states, or occurrences, and they make sentences strong and powerful. The appropriate use of verbs helps express ideas accurately. Therefore, to give a sentence its full strength and keep it short, do not bury the action, state, or occurrence in a noun + weak verb phrase.

Compare!
▪The catalyst produced a significant increase in conversion rate.
▪The catalyst significantly increased the conversion rate.

make an examination of …
✅ examine

present a comparison of …
✅ compare

be in agreement …
✅ agree

perform an analysis of …
✅ analyze

produce an improvement of …
✅ improve

make measurements …
✅ measure

make an impression …
✅ impress

Somewhere in 1830-ies, at the meeting of the British Association for the Advancement of Science in Cambridge, the poet Samuel Taylor Coleridge made his point. He insisted that men of science should not be referred to as philosophers since they were typically digging, observing, mixing or electrifying – that is, they were empirical men of experimentation and not philosophers of ideas. Science was everyday labor, whereas philosophy was lofty thought. In response to Coleridge’s challenge William Whewell, the polymath, invented the term – “in analogy with artist we form scientist”.

Curiously, this perfect linguistic accommodation of workmanship and inspiration was n'ot readily accepted. It took about thirty years and scientist first came into popular use in the US before being adopted by GB.

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What were all of them called - from the times of Aristotle and including Newton, Galileo, Mendel, Galen? All those who we would refer to as scientists today?

Natural Philosophers

What can a research paper do?

This paper addresses the performance of the algorithm used in…

This paper clarifies the role of pesticides in . . .

This paper describes the mechanism by which . . .

This paper details the algorithm used for . . .

This paper discusses the influence of acidity on . . .

This paper explains how the new encoding scheme . . .

This paper offers four recommendations for . . .

This paper presents the results of . . .

This paper proposes a set of guidelines for . . .

This paper provides the complete framework and . . .

This paper reports on our progress so far . . .

This paper suggests an approach for improving…

This paper summarizes our results for 27 patients with . . .

After the release of ChatGPT-like LLMs, some words strongly increased their frequency of occurrence in the abstracts of scientific papers. The LLM preferences appeared to be style-affecting verbs and adjectives. This ChatGPT-style flowery language is well-illustrated with the examples from real paper abstracts:

▪️By meticulously delving into the intricate web connecting [...] and [...], this comprehensive chapter takes a deep dive into their involvement as significant risk factors for [...].

▪️A comprehensive grasp of the intricate interplay between [...] and [...] is pivotal for effective therapeutic strategies.

Scientists use LLM-assisted writing to improve grammar, rhetoric, and overall readability of their texts as well as to translate into English. However, one day scientific texts might look as if they were cast in the same mould. So it is pivotal for researchers to meticulously delve into the intricate interplay of English grammar and vocabulary to find their author’s voice.

Pejman Milani, the founder of Milani Creative, used to be a a high school film & animation teacher with more than 20 years of experience. In 2022, he started sharing visual metaphors to teach big ideas fast and encourage people to live a more positive, creative life to make the world a more creative place.

❤️ It’s his metaphors about writing we love most!

Многие знают, сколько сил и времени занимают нумерация параграфов, рисунков, таблиц, ссылок на литературу, перепроверки выравнивания текста и межстрочного интервала, переноса кусков текста так, чтобы рисунок с подписью остался на одной странице...

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